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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及--个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限- -;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

During my last summer holiday, I go to the countryside to enjoy myself. I saw mother bird stay in her nest in a big tree, watching some of her baby flying away. I thought she must be very proud of her children, that were able to find her own food now. But she might also feel a sense of loss since they wouldn't need of her day-to-day care any long. For my parents,things are much easier. We have set up our family blog to posting our photos and journals.Once I leave for college, we can convenient share our experiences but support each other.Their“nest" will never be empty.

 

【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者通过观察小鸟长大后离开鸟妈妈,想到了自己的父母。庆幸的是,因为网络父母的“巢”从来不会空。 1.考查时态。根据last summer holiday可知句子用一般过去时态,故把go改成went。 2.考查不定冠词。句意:我看见一只鸟妈妈呆在她的巢里,在一棵大树上,看着她的一些孩子飞走了。结合句意可知在mother前加a。 3.考查名词复数。句意:我看见一只鸟妈妈呆在她的巢里,在一棵大树上,看着她的一些孩子飞走了。some of+名词复数,故把baby改成babies。 4.考查定语从句。句意:我想她一定为她的孩子们感到非常自豪,他们现在能够自己找食物了。that不能引导非限制性定语从句,此处children做先行词,文章运用拟人的手法,故把that改成who。 5.考查形容词性物主代词。句意:我想她一定为她的孩子们感到非常自豪,他们现在能够自己找食物了。根据children可知用代词复数替代,故把her改成their。 6.考查及物动词。句意:她可能也感到失落,因为他们不再需要她每天的照顾了。此处need“需要”是及物动词,后面直接跟宾语,故把need后面的of去掉。 7.考查固定搭配。not……any longer“不再”,故把long改成longer。 8.考查动词不定式作目的状语。句意:我们创建了家庭博客在上面张贴我们的照片和日志。此处是不定式做目的状语,故把posting改成post。 9.考查词性转化。此处share“分享”是动词,由副词来修饰,故把convenient改成conveniently。 10.考查并列连词。句意:一旦我考上大学,我们能很方便地分享经历,并能互相支持。前后是一种并列的递进关系,故把but改成and。  
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1.A. journeys B. holidays C. lectures D. classes

2.A. trucks B. suitcases C. books D. computers

3.A. bring out B. take away C. get through D. pay for

4.A. hard B. light C. unforgettably D. happily

5.A. gone B. appeared C. lessened D. grown

6.A. expensive B. useful C. beautiful D. enjoyable

7.A. weighed B. put C. turned D. calmed

8.A. treasure B. possess C. move D. demand

9.A. confusion B. matter C. hate D. comfort

10.A. final B. pleasant C. tiring D. latest

11.A. compare B. take C. fill D. stand

12.A. soul B. body C. home D. college

13.A. strange B. little C. kind D. smart

14.A. knowledge B. hope C. thought D. laughter

15.A. love B. information C. time D. money

16.A. burst out B. worn out C. given up D. lifted up

17.A. ready B. eager C. fit D. responsible

18.A. world B. weight C. travel D. heart

19.A. hardly B. always C. rather D. never

20.A. cover B. wrap C. unpack D. untie

 

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●Determine your reading goal.2.This goal should be clear and backed up with a purpose. Start by thinking about how a consistent reading pattern can help you grow indifferent areas of your life-spirit, academics, career, relationships and more.

3. Once you' re done setting your reading goal for the year, you'll need a list to back it up. Write out a list of the amazing books you want to read. Ask for recommendations from friends and instructors. It s important to keep a journal listing the books you'll like to read for each month.

●Get a responsible reading partner to promote your reading. Goals need to be backed up in order to help put a check and encourage you during times you don't feel motivated.4.

To develop a reading culture, you must first analyze your current reading habits. Do you read at all?5. In order to truly achieve your reading goals and build a consistent reading habit, you'll need to set up simple systems find responsible partners and generally be hungry to grow beyond your comfort zone.

A. Do you study hard at school?

B. Make a list of books for each month.

C. Do you start off and stop at some point?

D. Get up early and go to bed late to back up your goal.

E. It's important to start off by setting a goal to create a reading habit.

F. Get a friend willing to read, and create a plan to help you achieve your reading goals.G. It can make you think deeper, sharpen your skills and teach you more about your field.

 

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    Scientists have found what they believe are pieces of a meteor(流星)that fell to the earth last year. The objects were discovered off the coast of the United States in the Pacific Ocean.

The crew of the Nautilus, a private research ship, recovered the rock particles(颗粒).The Nautilus is operated by the Ocean Exploration Trust. The group says its aim at present is to examine areas of the ocean that have never been explored before.

The search was launched after US government weather stations observed a large meteorite exploding some months ago. The explosion lit up the sky and sent the rock particles to the earth. The meteorite fall was the largest recorded over the United States in at least 20years. The team includes scientists from NASA, the Olympic Coast National Marine Sanctuaryand the University of Washington. The scientists examined what they believe were two small meteorite fragments. Further testing is needed before they can confirm that the material came from the explosion.

The Nautilus is equipped with two remotely operated vehicles(ROVs) called Hercules and Argus. These robotic submarines help researchers find and collect materials from the seafloor. The fact that the particles landed in the ocean, instead of on land, means larger pieces may have survived and can be studied. For this reason, scientists decided to launch the first intentional search for meteorites from the ocean, Until the latest research, scientists had only accidentally discovered a small number of meteorites from drilling operations.

The objects recovered from the bottom of the sea likely came from the recent explosion for two main reasons. Firstmeteorite particles are basically made of glassy materials that do not tend to last long in seawater. Secondly, they came from what looked like a small hole on the seafloor. Some evidence shows that they came from something that fell.

1.What is the current goal of the crew of the Ocean Exploration Trust?

A. To recover the rock particles.

B. To observe movements of the universe.

C. To study unexplored places of the ocean.

D. To examine creatures of the explored ocean.

2.What mainly caused the start of the search in the sea?

A. A huge meteor shower. B. Business value of meteors.

C. Plenty of natural resources. D. The brainstorm of researchers.

3.Why do the scientists prefer to search for meteors in the ocean?

A. They can find meteors more easily.

B. They may find bigger rock particles.

C. They like to explore strange sea areas.

D. They have better submarine equipment.

4.What does the author intend to do in the last paragraph?

A. Offer clues for the search.

B. Give reasons to support a guess.

C. Stress the importance of the event.

D. Describe the process of the search.

 

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    More and more people in America are celebrating the Indian holiday Diwali. Diwali is Hindi for “row of lights”. It is the most important holiday in India.

Many people around the world are beginning to celebrate it as well. The United States is one of the places where the festival is becoming more common. Diwali celebrations can now be found at American landmarks like Disneyland in California and New York City’s Times Square. They are also held in many parks and museums.

Neeta Bhasin created the Times Square event. She said Indian immigrants have found great success in America. But, she said, many Americans still do not know much about India. So, she decided to act. “I felt it’s about time that we should take India to mainstream America and show India’s rich culture, heritage, arts and variety to the world,” she said, “and I couldn’t find a better place than Times Square.”

Bhasin came to the United States from India 40 years ago. She is president of ASB Communications, the marketing firm behind Diwali at Times Square. Tens of thousands of people attend the event, now in its fourth year.

In India, Diwali is a five-day harvest festival held just before the Hindu New Year. The exact dates change from year to year but Diwali is always in the fall. Celebrations include lighting oil lamps or candles called “diyas”.

A Diwali celebration will light up Disney California Adventure Park in Anaheim this year. Visitors can watch performances of traditional Indian dances and take part in a Bollywood dance party. The event is part of a Festival of Holidays program at the theme park to show cultural traditions from around the world. The program takes place on November 10th through January 7th.

San Antonio, Texas, also holds a Diwali celebration. And it is one of the nation’s largest celebrations, with more than 15,000 people in attendance each year. Visitors can enjoy Indian dance, food and fireworks. Organizers also plan to float hundreds of lighted candles in the San Antonio River, along the city’s famous River Walk.

1.Which is the main symbol in the Indian holiday Diwali?

A.Dances. B.Lamps.

C.Food. D.Clothes.

2.Why did Neeta Bhasin set up the Times Square event?

A.To make the American culture richer.

B.To create a new business for the firm.

C.To make Indian culture better known in the US.

D.To show the achievements of Indian immigrants.

3.What do we know about Diwali?

A.It is held in autumn in India.

B.It lasts five days in America.

C.It has been held for 40 years in America.

D.It happens from November 10th to January 7th in India.

4.What is the main idea of the text?

A.Diwali is mainly celebrated in Disney Parks.

B.Many American cities compete to hold Diwali.

C.Indian Holiday Diwali lights up America, too.

D.Diwali has become the most important holiday in India.

 

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