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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday I watched a circus show. A girl rode an one-wheeled bike on a small table with a lot of flower on it. She didn’t knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a better job. One of them could calculate the number!

The most exciting program was to see a young man walk the tightrope. He stood on a rope with a balanced pole in his hands. Two girls stood on his head, which made himself have no alternative but keep holding up. Therefore, another two girls sat on the red belt tying to either end of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step of great care. Every viewer held out his breath. At last he succeed in walking across the 8-meter-long tightrope.

 

an→a flower→flowers better→good himself→him keep前加to Therefore→Moreover/Furthermore/Besides/Additionally tying→tied of→with out去掉 succeed→succeeded 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章介绍了作者在马戏团观看的演出,其中包括女孩在小桌子上骑独轮车,算数的小狗,走钢丝的年轻人等等。走钢丝的年轻人让作者印象最为深刻,因为还有两个女孩站在他的头上,最终年轻人还是成功的走过了钢丝。 1. 考查冠词。句意:一个女孩在一张摆着许多花朵的小桌子上骑着独轮车。分析句子可知,one-wheeled的首字母不是元音字母发音,因此不能使用不定冠词an,故将an改为a。 2. 考查名词复数。句意:一个女孩在一张摆着许多花朵的小桌子上骑着独轮车。分析句子可知,flower为可数名词,a lot of后接名词的复数形式,意为“很多……”,故将flower改为flowers。 3. 考查形容词的比较级。句意:一些小狗也表现的非常好。分析句子可知,前文中并没有出现与小狗的表演进行对比的事件,因此不需要使用形容词的比较级,故将better改为good。 4. 考查反身代词。句意:两个女孩站在他的头上,这使他别无选择,只能继续坚持。分析句子可知,该句为非限制性定语从句,which在从句中作主语,指代前文中出现的“Two girls stood on his head”这件事,从句中的主语和宾语不是同一个人(物),因此不能使用反身代词,故将himself改为him。 5. 考查固定词组。句意:两个女孩站在他的头上,这使他别无选择,只能继续坚持。分析句子可知,此处为固定词组“have no alternative…but to do sth.”意为“除了……别无选择”,故在keep前加to。 6. 考查副词。句意:此外,另外两个女孩坐在红色的带子上,并试图绑在他肩上钢筋的两端。分析句子可知,前文提到已经有两个女孩站在了他的头上,后文提到又有两个女孩在他的身上,后文的内容与前文内容为层递关系,而不是承接关系,故将Therefore改为Moreover/Furthermore/Besides/Additionally。 7. 考查非谓语。句意:此外,另外两个女孩坐在红色的带子上,并试图绑在他肩上钢筋的两端。分析句子可知,another two girls与动词tie之间是逻辑上的被动关系,女孩无法自己把自己绑在钢筋上,因此需使用过去分词表示被动。故将tying改为tied。 8. 考查介词。句意:这个年轻人迈出了非常小心的第一步。分析句子可知,介词of表示从属关系,with great care为固定词组,意为“非常小心;小心翼翼”,且with作介词时可以表示“带有......的心情、态度等”。故将of改为with。 9. 考查及物动词的用法。句意:每一个观众都屏住了自己的呼吸。分析句子可知,hold是及物动词,后跟宾语时不需要接介词,故将out去掉。 10. 考查动词时态。句意:最后,他成功地走过了8米长的钢丝。分析文章可知,全文使用了一般过去时,为保证时态的一致性,因此succeed也应使用一般过去时,故将succeed改为succeeded。  
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16.A.touched B.favored C.influenced D.sponsored

17.A.advertise B.express C.support D.distribute

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20.A.Therefore B.However C.Anyway D.Somewhat

 

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