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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画横线(),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。

When the earthquake was happened in 2008 my aunt was still a little girl in small county in Sichuan. Today, she can well remember doctors and nurses in white overalls which were busy day and night save the injured in our hometown. It was then when she made up her mind to be someone like them. Her dream came truly after she graduated from a local medical school. On January 2020, when bad news came that Hubei was badly in need of doctors and nurses to fight COVID-19, she applied to be there to help out but her application was approved. Before she leaves, she told us she was grateful for what people did for us after the earthquake and that she had decided to pay them forward.

 

1.去掉was 2.small前添加a 3.which→who/that 4.save→saving 5.when→that 6.truly→true 7.On→In 8.but→and 9.leaves→left 10.them→it 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。主要介绍了作者的阿姨在2008年地震时被日夜忙碌抢救伤员的医生和护士所启发,决心成为像他们那样的人,后来她在当地一所医学院毕业,并在2020年主动加入抗击新冠肺炎的工作中。 1.考查动词用法。动词happen表示“发生”没有被动语态。故去掉was。 2.考查冠词。county为可数名词,此处表示泛指应用不定冠词,且small为辅音音素开头的单词,故small前添加a。 3.考查定语从句。此处为定语从句修饰先行词doctors and nurses,且先行词在从句中做主语,指人,应用关系代词who或that,which指物。故which改为who/that。 4.考查非谓语动词。根据短语be busy doing sth.表示“忙于做某事”。故save改为saving。 5.考查强调句。句意:就在那时,她下定决心要成为像他们那样的人。分析句子结构可知此处为强调句结构“it be+被强调部分+that/who+其他”,且本句中被强调部分为then,故应用that。故when改为that。 6.考查形容词。根据短语dream come true表示“梦想成真”。故truly改为true。 7.考查介词。根据后文January 2020可知表示“在几月”应用介词in,句首字母要大写。故On改为In。 8.考查连词。句意:她申请去那里帮忙,她的申请被批准了。结合句意可知上下文为承接关系,应用and。故but改为and。 9.考查动词时态。此处描述的是过去发生的动作,应用一般过去时。故leaves改为left。 10.考查代词。句意:临走前,她告诉我们,她很感激地震后人们为我们所做的一切,她已经决定把它传递下去。此处指代上文what people did应用代词it。故them改为it。
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阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

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As we all know, it is of great importance to the planet 3. we stop using so much bloody plastic. Firstly, it is poisoning the seas. Whales are washed up 4. (die). It is the huge amounts of plastic inside their 5. (stomach) that kill them. Secondly, if it is poisoning the seas, it’s 6. (probable) poisoning us, too, for we eat a load of things that come out of the sea.

Lately, a new and encouraging 7. (develop) started with a Facebook post showing banana leaves being used in the Rimping supermarket in Chiang Mai. Thailand. After seeing how much good publicity the post 8. (get) in the past few months, supermarkets in Vietnam have all followed suit.

According to a spokesperson for Lotte Market in Ho Chizminh City, they’re only doing this as 9. test, but they plan to expand the action nationwide and hope to be able to use the leaves for meat as well as vegetables before too long. Besides, another Vietnamese supermarket, has already started using biodegradable (可生物降解的) bags 10. (make) from corn.

This is a step in the right direction and we do need it.

 

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It isn’t because they’re “too cool for school”; it’s ________ against the rules. According to the Disney Park rule-book, any guest aged 14 or older may be ________ admittance if they are ________ costumes or masks.

The ________ of this rule is two-fold. One, your face can’t be ________ and you can’t be carrying anything resembling a real gun. This is obviously a ________ issue, so choose your cosplay wisely. The second intention is to ________ that any interactions park guests have with cast members remain genuine (真实的) and on brand. If there were 20 ________ running around dressed like Cinderella, some of the guests in costume may get one confused with Disney’s official princess, ruining the fantasy for children. He may convey false messages or break one of the 15 Disney etiquette (礼仪) rules all Disney employees must ________.

________, that doesn’t mean that you can’t truly get into the ________ of your favorite Disney character the next time you head to one of the parks. ________ Disney fan Leslie Kay began a trend that is called Disney Bounding. In ________, Disney Bounding is dressing up in a non-costume outfit ________ by your favorite character. So maybe you can’t dress up in Princess Belle’s iconic (标志性的) yellow dress, but you could wear a yellow dress with teacup-themed jewelry. Try to be creative with your ________ the next time you head to one of the parks.

1.A.discussed B.encouraged C.confirmed D.ignored

2.A.delighted B.combined C.complete D.complex

3.A.older B.stronger C.taller D.cleverer

4.A.because B.in case C.once D.even if

5.A.recognize B.understand C.remember D.spot

6.A.actually B.properly C.generally D.specially

7.A.given B.promised C.refused D.left

8.A.buying B.making C.changing D.wearing

9.A.origin B.purpose C.effect D.weakness

10.A.covered B.injured C.identified D.acknowledged

11.A.attitude B.finance C.dignity D.safety

12.A.discover B.admit C.ensure D.prove

13.A.adults B.workers C.performers D.guards

14.A.make B.follow C.learn D.support

15.A.However B.Therefore C.Moreover D.Anyhow

16.A.nature B.spirit C.quality D.fight

17.A.Rude B.Devoted C.Annoyed D.Disappointed

18.A.brief B.addition C.fact D.part

19.A.created B.designed C.copied D.inspired

20.A.security B.manners C.intention D.look

 

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    Ketchup (番茄酱) is a magical little dressing. It has a sweet and salty bite and makes just about any food more appetizing. 1. So how did ketchup become best friends with French fries? Let’s start at the beginning.

2.In fact, the first ketchup recipe did not include tomatoes! Instead the Chinese made it from salted fish. Doesn’t sound as appetizing as today’s dip, does it?3. In the 1900s it started making its way to everyone s dinner tables and refrigerators when the Heinz family bottled and sold it. Ketchup underwent another makeover in the 1970s with the rise of high-fructose corn syrup (高果糖玉米糖浆).

America’s favorite way to eat vegetables originated not in France as the name suggests, but in Belgium. When French fries made their way onto the scene in Europe in the early 1800s, ketchup, as we now know it, had not been invented yet. Americans accepted the side dish in the 1930s and enjoyed them fried in beef fat. 4. There are reports of early adopters dipping their fries in ketchup from as early as the late 1800s, but the trend didn’t take off in America until the 1940s. As the popularity of fast food restaurants grew, so did the desire to dip our fries in that tasty red sauce. Fast food restaurants started serving French fries with ketchup. 5.

A.You can even clean with it!

B.We have been hooked since.

C.They didn’t find ketchup delicious at all.

D.Then French fries were invented to go with ketchup.

E.In their birthplace, fries are served with salad dressing.

F.Red, tomato-based ketchup didn’t appear until much later.

G.Ketchup has been around for centuries but in a completely different form.

 

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    Back in November 1988, Robert Tappan Morris was a 20-something graduate student at Cornell who wanted to know how big the Internet was- that is, how many computers were connected to it. So he wrote a program that would travel from computer to computer and ask each machine to send a signal back to a control server, which would keep count. That was how the world’s first cyber (网络) attack set the stage for modern cyber security challenges.

The program worked well. Morris had known that if it traveled too fast there might be problems, but the limits he built in weren’t enough to keep the program from blocking up large sections of the Internet, both copying itself to new machines and sending those pings (电子脉冲) back, When he realized what was happening, even his messages warning system administrators about the problem couldn’t get through. Large numbers of Internet-connected computers are told to send lots of traffic to one particular address, overloading it with so much activity that either the system shuts down or its network connections are completely blocked. Morris’s program is now known as the “Morris worm”.

Worms and viruses are similar, but different in one key way: A virus needs a command, from a user or a hacker (黑客), to run its program. A worm, by contrast, hits the ground running all on its own. For example. even if you never open your email program, a worm that gets onto your computer might email a copy of itself to everyone in your address book.

In a time when few people were concerned about harmful software and nobody had protective software in his computer, the Morris worm spread quickly. It took 72 hours for researchers at Purdue and Berkeley to stop the worm. It affected tens of thousands of systems, Cleaning up the infection cost hundreds or thousands of dollars for each affected machine.

Morris wasn’t trying to destroy the Internet, but he was sentenced t0 three years of probation (缓刑) and a roughly US $ 10.000 fine. In the late 1990s, though. he became a dot-com millionaire- and is now a professor at MIT.

1.What is Morris’s intention 1o write the program known now as the “Morris worm”?

A.To test the effect of protective software.

B.To start a harmful attack on the Internet.

C.To see how well a program can work on the Internet.

D.To get the number of the computers connected to the Internet.

2.What is the second paragraph mainly about?

A.What loss the problem caused.

B.How the problem was dealt with.

C.How the unexpected problem came about.

D.What Morris did to prevent the problem from expanding.

3.What does the underlined part “hits the ground” in Paragraph 3 mean?

A.Copies itself. B.Gets on the Internet.

C.Gets the user’s command. D.Copies your email address book.

4.What happened to Morris after the attack?

A.He was punished for it. B.He invented a protective software.

C.He got help from a millionaire. D.He was asked to clear up the Internet.

 

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    I grew up in California but have spent about four years living in various parts of the UK. The first thing I noticed was that my West-Midlands host family did not sound like the queen. I’ve since learnt that accents change almost every five miles. As far as America goes. I can tell the West Coast from the East or the South, but I can’t tell you a state, much less a county ().

The next thing I couldn’t imagine was the quiet, stare-ahead norm of public transportation- if you talk to somebody on the Tube, you’re probably a serial killer or a lost tourist.

I’ve had to deal with the Tube from Heathrow to Victoria with heavy bags more times and Victoria Station is not exactly tourist friendly. Each time I’ve had someone walk up and ask to help with my bags. Not once have they been English. In America, at least from what I’ve experienced, people will start a chat if they see you’re travelling by yourself, and I always immediately have someone taller offer to put my things in an overhead bin (行李箱).

Opening hours-especially Sunday trading laws have also taken so much to get used to. In America, 24/7 fast food, grocery stores. petrol stations, etc. are the norm. In my first year in the UK,I forgot it was Easter Sunday, and went into town at 200 pm. Imagine my surprise when 1 found the city center was deserted, and there wasn’t a single car at Tesco. Approaching the building, I saw a large sign announcing opening times. I had to make do with plain bread until 900 am Monday, when I’d be able to pay for groceries again.

Speaking of groceries, it took so many people telling me I was crazy to convince me to eat eggs here- they’re not refrigerated, and they’ll often have bits of feather or chicken waste on the outside. 1 am now aware that they ‘re safe, but coming from a childhood of perfectly clean, white, large AAA eggs, I was convinced I’d die a terrible salmonella (沙门氏菌) death.

1.What’s the author’s impression of the transportation of the UK?

A.It’s very dangerous to use public transportations.

B.It’s easy for a tourist 10 get lost on public transportations.

C.British people willingly offer help on public transportations.

D.British people don’t talk to each other on public transportations.

2.What happened on Easter Sunday in the author’s first year in the UK?

A.He left the city center. B.He failed to buy any food.

C.A supermarket closed down. D.A restaurant opened in a tall building.

3.What is a good suggestion to a foreigner in the UK?

A.Try to speak like the queen.

B.Avoid eating unhealthy eggs.

C.Store some plain bread in the fridge.

D.Pay attention to the opening hours of the shops.

4.What’s the best title for the text?

A.How to Get Used to Life in the UK

B.What do I Find Strange about the UK

C.How Difficult It Is to Travel in the UK

D.What Can a Foreigner Expect in the UK

 

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