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The moment I stepped in high school, I have made up my mind to study hard for the purpose of entering the good university. In the first year, I made a lot of new friends, all of who were so excellent. I felt great pressure during the second year. My scores went up or down and I felt so worrying. I told me that I needed relaxation. Listen to music was a good way. Besides, I would like to talk my friends, because they understood me. We would have some tea in the shop and then share secret. When we laughed out happy, all the annoyance would disappear.
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Nowadays, it seems that many are becoming more and more focused on eating a plant-based diet and leaving out animal1.(product). For meat lovers, a new study has found a link2.how much meat a person eats and an increased risk of premature death.
According to research3.(publish) in the American Journal of Clinical Nutrition, people who ate more red meat or processed meat in their diet had a4.(high) chance of dying from a long-lasting disease. The new research looked at data from the Kuopio Ischaemic Heart Disease Risk Factor Study,5.ongoing study that’s tracking risk factors for cardiovascular (心脏血管的) disease among middle-aged men from eastern Finland. The study population6. (make) up of 2,641 Finnish men between the ages of 42 and 60 when the study began between 1984 and 1989.
Researchers followed up with the men after 20 years — 1,225 of them had died. Those7.ate seven ounces or more of red or processed meat daily—or got the8.(major) of their protein from meat—had a 23 percent higher risk of premature death, according to Science Daily. This isn’t9.(actual) the first strike against red or processed meat: red or processed meat can increase your chances of10.(get) this disease.
Volunteering gives you an opportunity to change people's lives, including your own. It gives you the _________of playing a role in someone else's life, _______people who may not be able to help themselves. Why not______ a little time helping others, because in the end, what goes around comes around.
I think one of the most _______values I have gained through my_______at St. Clarets Hospital is the importance of service. Service_____making a difference in the lives of others. I believe that through volunteering at the hospital, I can ______this value. Each time I end my volunteer _____, I feel better and as if I have done something ______. This feeling has fueled me to_______volunteering. In the past years I have been ___ about my situation, and was discouraged because I felt I might not make a big ______ due to my young age.
However, I am relieved of this because I feel that through the hospital volunteer ______I can try to do my ______ and help others. Because of my involvement at St. Clarets Hospital, I have come to include service as a(n) ______ part of my life. I feel an obligation to do my best to help others and ________to society in any way I can.
I know that my experience as a St. Clare's Hospital volunteer has been a wonderful opportunity to ____ as a person, and I have made use of this to the best of my _______. Without my volunteer experience, I may have been a(n) _____ different person, lacking these skills. I have gained valuable skills, as well as learned
important lessons about life, which not only_______me now but my life in the future. Take action and join us on the way to serving others.
1.A.satisfaction B.meaning C.convenience D.comfort
2.A.protecting B.easing C.assisting D.leading
3.A.employ B.spend C.keep D.apply
4.A.wonderful B.fantastic C.intelligent D.important
5.A.story B.experience C.history D.experiment
6.A.includes B.appreciates C.considers D.starts
7.A.influence B.feel C.attempt D.realize
8.A.lesson B.chance C.analysis D.turn
9.A.difficult B.attractive C.worthwhile D.challenging
10.A.allow B.continue C.avoid D.prefer
11.A.upset B.concerned C.moved D.certain
12.A.result B.achievement C.difference D.exchange
13.A.program B.duty C.arrangement D.instruction
14.A.judgment B.mark C.part D.option
15.A.unbelievable B.outstanding C.particular D.necessary
16.A.contribute B.appeal C.lead D.react
17.A.promote B.grow C.study D.serve
18.A.confidence B.belief C.ability D.section
19.A.slightly B.approximately C.clearly D.totally
20.A.strikes B.benefits C.develops D.changes
Though China has increasingly adopted Western influences, the traditional family structure is still highly valued and holds a vital position in Chinese culture.1.These have been a part of daily life for many centuries.
2. He is responsible for maintaining, providing for and protecting his family. At the same time, he is given all the decision-making power when it comes to his wife, family and other family members. He is also responsible for taking care of and paying for his children. In modem families, the family members consult elders about important decisions, but the father no longer has the final say in regards to his adult children's lives.
Traditional Chinese mothers usually stay at home to take care of the home, the children, and the rest of the family. 3. However, they still rely on their husbands or fathers for financial support at some point in their lives.
As in many Asian cultures, the elders of the family are respected for their wisdom. In both traditional and modem families, elders are taken care of and looked up to by the rest of the family. In traditional families, including those living in a rural environment, many households include five generations living together. 4.
The Chinese culture has undergone many dramatic changes in recent years. 5. Families are still cherished, honored and respected, whether you live in the traditional, rural environment, or the modern, urban city.
A.Many modem Chinese women have careers.
B.In the traditional Chinese family, the man is very important.
C.Women in modem times are actually completely independent.
D.However, the family structure and the importance of family values remain a focus.
E.Even in modem households, many grandparents live with their children and their kids.
F.Therefore, the family structure has also changed greatly, influencing many modem families.
G.Both traditional and modem Chinese families have similar values and morals to one another.
The team of researchers from the University of Lincoln, UK, is designing and building an app to help farmers in hot climates identify and record the spread of locusts(蝗虫) on their land.
By recognizing locusts through the smartphone’s camera, the app will be able to identify the stage of the insect's growth and record its location. This information can then be utilized so that the farmers can use pesticides(杀虫剂) more accurately in the early stages of their life time, greatly reducing the amount of crop damage.
This approach could also reduce remaining pesticide levels, leading to increased food safety while maintaining food security and protecting nearby water systems.
“Each year, approximately 18 million hectares of land are damaged by locusts, influencing hugely farmers and their productivity, explains Dr. Bashir Al-Diri from the School of Computer Science at the University of Lincoln.” Their monitoring techniques currently rely on field surveys by people through digging insect eggs, but this information only helps farmers to make mid and long-term forecasting decisions and can delay effective management measures. By digitally recording the exact number, age and location of locusts, we hope this new app will put more knowledge and more power into the hands of the farmers.
Dr. Al-Diri and his team of computer scientists work with the Lincoln Institute for Agri-food Technology at the University of Lincoln, aiming to support and improve productivity, efficiency and farming through research, education and new technology.
With advanced technology, the developers hope that the app will also be used for a wide range in the future to capture and document information about the natural world. For example, it could easily be adapted to help individuals identify plant diseases or to digitally capture the number and type of birds and wildlife in specific locations as part of national and international surveys.
1.What do we know about the app mentioned in the passage?
A.It has helped farmers record the spread of locusts.
B.It will be of great use for farmers in hot climates.
C.It may cost the farmers more than they expect.
D.It will remind farmers of what the locusts look like.
2.Which can replace the underlined word "utilized” in the passage?
A.Accessed. B.Controlled.
C.Arranged. D.Progressed.
3.What can we know according to Dr. Bashir Al-Diri?
A.Farmers don't know how to deal with locusts.
B.Their techniques can be used to dig insect eggs.
C.Farmers suffer greatly because of locusts.
D.Some steps must be taken before using the app.
4.What is the purpose of Al-Diri and his team?
A.To check if the app is useful in killing locusts.
B.To educate farmers on how to protect themselves.
C.To assist in raising agricultural production level.
D.To direct farmers to change their farming methods.
Older adults with a better sense of smell may live longer than those who have a poor sense of smell, a new study suggests. The study was a project of researchers in the United States that was ongoing for over 13 years. They asked nearly 2,300 men and women to identify 12 common smells. All the subjects were from 71 to 82 years of age. The researchers gave the adults scores, from 0 to as high as 12, based on how many smells they identified correctly.
During the years of follow-up investigation, over 1,200 of the subjects died. When the study was launched, none of the adults were weak. They could walk a little under half a kilometer, climb 10 steps and independently complete daily activities. In the latest findings, the researchers noted that those with a weak nose were 30 percent more likely to die than people with a good sense of smell. The findings were reported last month in the scientific publication Annals of Internal Medicine.
Honglei Chen, a doctor with Michigan State University in East Lansing, Michigan, was the lead writer of a report on the study. He said the connection between a poor sense of smell and an increased risk of dying was limited to adults who first reported good-to-excellent health. This suggests that a poor sense of smell is an early and sensitive sign for worsening health before it is recognizable in medical tests. With a poor sense of smell, people are more likely to die of brain and heart diseases, but not of cancer or breathing disorders.
The results also suggest that a poor sense of smell may be an early warning for poor health in older age that goes beyond dementia or other neurodegenerative(神经变性的) diseases. These often signal the beginning of a weakening of the mind or body.
1.What do you know about the study mentioned?
A.The study involved researchers from the world.
B.All the participants were of different ages.
C.The study began to be performed about 13 years ago.
D.2 ,300 men and women were young and healthy.
2.What was the situation like at the beginning of the study?
A.More than 1,200 of the participants passed away.
B.Many of the subjects were found with health problems.
C.All the subjects were independent of others when walking.
D.One third of the participants had a poor smell sense.
3.What can be inferred from the last two paragraphs?
A.People with a poor sense of smell have heart disease.
B.You should be careful with your health if you smell poorly.
C.People with a poor sense of smell won't suffer from cancer.
D.Most of the elder people may have the dementia disease.
4.Which is the best title for the passage?
A.Strong Sense of Smell May Be Linked to Longer Life
B.Old People Tend to Have a Poor Sense of Smell
C.A Number of Factors Result in Longer Life
D.Being Ill Means Losing the Sense of Smell
