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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Our school offers a variety of activities to students after school, especially arts activities. There are lots of music club on campus. In my great delight, I have joined the orchestra there I have made lots of new friends. Sometime, we represent our school in regional competitions and that is worthwhile to join in these contests. Amazingly, we also have a robotics club, which wins a national robot contest last month so it is getting increasing popular at present. In addition, academic clubs are offered as well, include the writing club and the French film club.

Although we have much burden of homework, but we still manage to take active part in various activities after school.

 

1.club→clubs 2.In→To 3.there→where 4.Sometime→Sometimes 5.that→it 6.wins→won 7.increasing→increasingly 8.include→including 9.去掉but 10.take后加an 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要通过作者的视角介绍了学校为学生提供各种课外活动,尤其是艺术活动,学生们都在积极努力参与其中。 1.考查名词。句意:校园里有很多音乐俱乐部。club为可数名词,在根据“lots of”可知,应用名词复数。故将club改为clubs。 2.考查介词。句意:使我非常高兴的是,我加入了乐队,在那里我结交了许多新朋友。to one’s delight,“令某人高兴的是”,固定结构。故将In改为To。 3.考查定语从句。句意:使我非常高兴的是,我加入了乐队,在那里我结交了许多新朋友。分析可知,“I have made lots of new friends”应是之前名词“the orchestra”的定语从句,先行词在从句中作地点状语,应用关系副词where引导。故将there改为where。 4.考查副词。句意:有时,我们代表学校参加地区性的比赛,参加这些比赛是值得的。分析可知,频率副词位于句首作状语,sometime虽为副词,但意为“某个时候”,与句意表达不符,应用sometimes,意为“有时”。故将Sometime改为Sometimes。 5.考查it作形式主语。句意:有时,我们代表学校参加地区性的比赛,参加这些比赛是值得的。分析可知,句子主语是“to join in these contests”,因此应用it作形式主语。故将that改为it。 6.考查时态。句意:令人惊讶的是,我们还有一个机器人俱乐部,它赢得了上个月的全国机器人比赛,所以它现在越来越受欢迎。分析可知,从句时间状语为“last month”,应用一般过去时。故将wins改为won。 7.考查副词。句意:令人惊讶的是,我们还有一个机器人俱乐部,它赢得了上个月的全国机器人比赛,所以它现在越来越受欢迎。副词作状语修饰形容词popular。故将increasing改为increasingly。 8.考查介词。句意:此外,还有学术俱乐部,包括写作俱乐部和法国电影俱乐部。including为介词后接名词。include改为including。 9.考查连词。句意:虽然我们有很多的家庭作业的负担,但我们仍然设法积极参加各种活动放学后。分析可知,“although we have much burden of homework”应是让步状语从句,表达转折含义,其后主句无需but作为连词。故将but去掉。 10.考查冠词。句意:虽然我们有很多的家庭作业的负担,但我们仍然设法积极参加各种活动放学后。take an active part in,“积极参加”,active首字母的发音为元音音素。故在take后加an。
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