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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Our school sports meeting finally came to an end last Friday. Tiring but cheerful, we made it a success. I can say it’s best one I have ever been taken part in. The opening ceremony was a feast for the eyes. To begin with, the headmaster makes a speech. Then came various performance, including singing, dancing and kung fu. Besides, students dressed up as dolls, and that they wanted to show was confident and talent. When the teachers’ shows began, the students were crazily. As a class photographer, I took pictures of such many brilliant moments, which, with doubt, meant a lot to all of us.

阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式，并将答案填写在答题卡上。

There are many great destinations in the UK, one of1.is the South- West of England. The most popular regions surrounding the South-West2. (be) the counties of Devon and Cornwall. They are by the coast and known for having some of3.sunniest weather in the UK.

In the heart of the South-West, Dartmoor National Park4.(vote ) the UK's favourite in 2016. There are plenty of breathtaking walks to choose from which will lead you5. (discover) Dartmoofs ancient and rugged (崎岖的) charm!

In the South - West you will find plenty of attractive and often deserted6.(beach ), Some examples include Whitesand Bay in Cornwall and Woolacombe beach inDevon. If you don't mind the7.( slight ) cooler temperatures than other beach destinations in Europe, you are in for a real treat !

Apart from8.( surround ) by beautiful nature, the South-West is full of urban gems (精华). The city of Exeter in Devon has great centers, as well as lots of cafes9.pubs. Cornwall has its own treasures too-pretty villages and towns such as St Ives and Mousehole line the coastline, and make for the perfect locations to spend those10.(relax) summer afternoons !

    Christopher Garrett was an engineer with the U.S. Army’s 10th Mountain Division. While serving in Afghanistan, Christopher was shot and ______. He was hospitalized and then medically ______.

Christopher was ______ to be returning home to his wife, Brittany, and was looking forward to getting back to normal life. Soon, ______, it became clear that “normal” was going to have a new ______.

Christopher’s ______ made things difficult. Things that had once come ______ to him-like mowing the lawn (修剪草坪) — now seemed almost impossible. Even still, Christopher was ______ not to let his injuries get the best of him. Even though he only had an old-fashioned, non-motorized push mower, he ______ to go out and mow the yard, working through the ______ until the job was done.

It was ______ for Brittany to watch her husband go through this pain. When she saw Christopher threw himself down on the ground in tears one day, she ran to him, thinking he was ______ an emotional breakdown. When she got out to the yard, however, she saw the ______ of Christopher’s tears Sitting in the yard was a(n) ______ riding lawn mower. Attached was a note: “I hope this ______ time for the things that matter most in your life. Thank you for your ______ and for my freedom. A grateful American.”

Though the Garretts have no ______ who left the mower in their yard, it is clear a neighbor had seen Christopher ______ and wanted to help. That person may never know just how much the ______ meant to the Garretts, but for this couple it was life-changing.

Christopher still has a long ______ ahead of him in the recovery process, but thanks to this generous stranger, the journey is now a little easier.

1.A. caught B. wounded C. trapped D. killed

2.A. recovered B. refused C. retired D. removed

3.A. fortunate B. disappointed C. happy D. unwilling

4.A. though B. therefore C. meanwhile D. instead

5.A. story B. direction C. result D. meaning

6.A. disability B. strength C. fear D. appearance

7.A. steadily B. quickly C. naturally D. easily

8.A. forced B. determined C. astonished D. persuade

9.A. continued B. preferred C. promised D. intended

10.A. hunger B. sorrow C. pain D. anger

11.A. embarrassing B. unusual C. annoying D. difficult

12.A. suffering B. imagining C. overcoming D. performing

13.A. source B. outcome C. purpose D. power

14.A. special B. ordinary C. strange D. new

15.A. takes B. saves C. occupies D. leaves

16.A. honesty B. service C. kindness D. attention

17.A. doubt B. question C. idea D. way

18.A. searching B. complaining C. struggling D. crying

19.A. note B. gift C. reward D. solution

20.A. life B. experience C. wait D. road

    Many of us are hardwired NOT to ask for help. We think it makes us appear weak. We think people will say no. we think we have to do everything ourselves.1.. We have to get over that, and there’s how:

Get over yourself

No one—and I mean NO ONE----got anywhere alone. You cannot and should not do everything yourself. You are not, in fact, always the best person for the job, or the “only” person who can do it. asking for help is sign of strength, not weakness. Asking for help clears space for you and frees your time and energy. 2..

Rebuild your thinking

Rebuild what it means to ask for help from “I am a weak, incompetent loser” to “I am strategically allocating my time to focus on what matters most.” Don’t focus on the fact that you can’t do something or don’t have the time.  3.. It’s a chance to connect, a chance to value a colleague, a chance to get something done faster or better, a chance to optimize your own time and talents.

4.

Asking for help is about tapping valuable resources to get the best outcome the most quickly with the fewest resources expended. That’s a fancy way of saying “get the right people for the job.” 5.. And the best way to do that is to know your colleagues, and proactively build relationships.

A.Know your colleagues.

B.Think about your colleagues.

C.Your energy can’t be wasted.

D.It’s a smart strategy.

E.It’s all about building the right team.

F.Instead, think about what you will gain from the ask.

G.Whatever the reason, we don’t ask for the help we need.

    Growing up can sometimes seem like a roller coaster. There are ups and downs and unexpected turns. Abuse or neglect by adult can make the ride even rougher. But being bullied(欺凌) by another child can leave especially lasting scars. That's the finding of a new study.

Bullied kids face a high risk of mental health problems as teens and as young adults. Indeed bullied kids might be worse off than those who had suffered physical abuse or neglect, the study found.

Dieter Wolke works at the University of Warwick in England. Until recently, most studies of child victims focused not on bullying but on maltreatment, this psychologist says. Maltreatment includes physical or emotional abuse, neglect or other behaviors that can harm a child.

Wolke's team wanted to better understand how bullying's long-term effects compare to those due to maltreatment. They focused on 4,026 children in the United Kingdom and 1,420 more in the United States. Information about bullying and maltreatment was collected for American children to age 13.They collected the same information for British youth up to age 16. The researchers also gathered data on each individual's mental health as a young adult.

Among the Americans, 36 percent of bullied kids had mental problems later. Those problems included anxiety, which is a state of excessive worry. They also included depression. That is a feeling of hopelessness that can last a long time. Among kids who had been maltreated by adults, 17 percent later suffered mental health problems. That was less than half the rate seen in people who had been bullied as school kids.

In the U. K. group, the difference was less spectacular. Roughly 25 percent of the bullied kids reported mental health problems later, compared with about 17 percent who had been maltreated.

But however you look at it, the finding are disturbing, Wolke says. They show that bullied children have similar or worse mental health problems later in life. And that’s why he says schools, health services and other agencies must work together to end bullying.

1.According to the passage, which of the statements is TRUE?

A.Kids treated cruelly recover soon after they grow up.

B.All bullied kids have mental health problems.

C.Most kids with maltreatment experience tend to become violent adults.

D.Most studies didn’t pay much attention to bullying until recently.

2.How does the author support the theme of the text?

A.By providing research results. B.By stating arguments.

C.By explaining statistical data. D.By giving examples.

3.The underlined word “spectacular” in paragraph 6 could be best replaced by _______.

A.slight B.dramatic

C.specific D.similar

4.According to the text, what does Wolke suggest doing?

A.Taking good care of children.

B.Joining hands to stop bullying.

C.Keeping psychologically healthy.

D.Comparing different types of abuse.