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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

No body language can be attractive than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile make us happy, but also it enables others to feel delightful. Sometimes a smile is too powerful that it gives people suffered from disasters great courage.

A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a plenty of people when a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan. Right after he is rescued by the soldiers from the ruin, he saluted and smiled to them. Her smile was like sunshine, that warmed people who were in sadness.

It is safe to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult. Smile now, or you will find that life is full of wonders.

 

1. attractive前加more 2. delightful l→ delighted 3. too → so 4. suffered → suffering 5. a去掉 6. is→ was 7. ruin → ruins 8. Her→ His 9. that → which 10. or → and 【解析】 本文是说明文。没有任何身体语言比微笑更有魅力,文章通过例子说明微笑能给遭受灾难的人巨大的勇气。时刻微笑,你会发现生活充满了奇迹。 1.考查形容词比较级。句意:没有任何身体语言比微笑更有魅力。根据than可知用比较级,故attractive前加more。 2.考查形容词。delightful“可爱的,令人愉快的”,此处修饰指人的others用delighted,意为“高兴的”,故delightful改为delighted。 3.考查固定句型。句意:有时微笑是如此强大,以至于它给遭受灾难的人巨大的勇气。句中表示“如此……以至于”是so …that句型,故too改为 so。 4.考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知句中已有谓语动词gives,suffer应该用非谓语动词形式。people 和suffer是主动关系,用-ing形式作定语,故suffered改为suffering。 5.考查固定短语。表示“许多,大量”是plenty of,是固定短语。故a去掉。 6.考查时态语态。根据时间when a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan.可知发生在过去,此处应该是一般过去时的被动,故is改为was。 7.考查名词复数。ruin作为名词是“毁坏,毁灭”,此处在“废墟”应该用复数形式ruins,故ruin改为 ruins。 8.考查代词。根据A little boy和he is rescued可知Lang Zheng是男孩,故Her改为His。 9.考查定语从句。根据句意和标点可知,此处是非限制性定语从句,that不能引导非限制性定语从句。指代前面句子用关系代词which,故that改为which。 10.考查连词。句意:现在微笑吧,你会发现生活充满了奇迹。前后句是并列关系,不是转折,故or改为and。
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Encourage new talents and ______ them. If we do not exhibit this socially, I am sure we will not ______ it in our job either.

1.A.while B.yet C.otherwise D.so

2.A.cooperation B.organization C.transformation D.method

3.A.specific B.unusual C.common D.ordinary

4.A.online B.behavioral C.personal D.popular

5.A.contain B.lack C.oppose D.promote

6.A.bosses B.employees C.readers D.leaders

7.A.thoroughly B.merely C.precisely D.roughly

8.A.hope B.regret C.stop D.hesitate

9.A.post B.faith C.name D.honor

10.A.in need of B.for lack of C.with regard to D.on account of

11.A.dissatisfied B.annoyed C.astonished D.confused

12.A.team B.level C.habit D.reputation

13.A.junior B.average C.different D.superior

14.A.skipping B.considering C.missing D.pressing

15.A.remarks B.opinions C.congratulations D.suggestions

16.A.means B.proves C.requires D.changes

17.A.buried in B.judged by C.replaced by D.intended for

18.A.still B.ever C.just D.even

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20.A.notice B.show C.like D.represent

 

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Financial Education-Awareness Dilemma

When it comes to financial education, the majority of today's youth will regard it as a necessity for certain specific people who want to make their career in the financial world. 1. Actually, elementary financial education is a must for all, as money transaction is an essential part of our day-to-day life.

Suppose you have $100 in a saving account that pays simple interest at the rate of 2%per year. lf you leave the money in the account, how much will you have accumulated after 5 years: more than $102, exactly $102, or less than $102? The test might look simple, but only half of the people surveyed gave the correct answer.

2.The explanation goes as follows: People with low levels of financial literacy suffer from that lack of knowledge at every stage of their lives. Researchers on this subject say people with a high degree of financial literacy are more likely to plan for their retirement. 3.

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A.Financial education must start early.

B.However, they miss an important point.

C.Why does each of us have to face a financial challenge?

D.Why does financial literacy matter so much in our society'?

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Another indication that human emissions surpass those of volcanoes is the fact that atmospheric CO2 levels, as measured by sampling stations around the world, have gone up consistently year after year regardless of whether or not there have been major volcanic eruptions in specific years. “If it were true that individual volcanic eruptions dominated human emissions and were causing the rise in carbon dioxide concentrations, then these carbon dioxide records would be full of spikes —one for each eruption,” says Coby Beck, a journalist writing for online environmental news. “Instead, such records show a smooth and regular trend.”

Furthermore, some scientists believe that volcanic eruptions, like that of Mt.St. Helens in 1980 and Mt. Pinatubo in 1991, actually lead to short-term global cooling, not warming, as sulfur dioxide (SO2), ash and other particles in the air and stratosphere(平流层) reflect some solar energy instead of letting it into Earth's atmosphere. SO2, which converts to sulfuric acid aerosol, when it hits the stratosphere, can linger there for as long as seven years and can exercise a cooling effect long after a volcanic eruption has taken place.

Scientists tracking the effects of the major 1991 eruption of the Philippines’ Mt. Pinatubo found that the overall effect of the blast was to cool the surface of the Earth globally by some 0.5 degrees Celsius a year later, even though rising human greenhouse gas emissions and an El Nino event caused some surface warming during the 1991-1993 study period.

In an interesting twist on the issue, British researchers last year published an article in the peer reviewed scientific journal Nature showing how volcanic activity may be contributing to the melting of ice caps in Antarctica but not because of any emissions, natural or man-made. Instead, scientists Hugh Corr and David Vaughan of the British Antarctic Survey believe that volcanoes underneath Antarctica may be melting the continents ice sheets from below, just as warming air temperatures from human-induced emissions erode them from above.

1.According to Paragraph 1, some people argue that   .

A.their opinion is supported by science.

B.volcanoes generate most of the greenhouse gases.

C.human activities are to blame for greenhouse gases.

D.carbon emissions produced by volcanoes are increasing.

2.What does the underlined word “spikes" in Paragraph 3 probably mean?

A.Sudden increases. B.Smooth trends.

C.Stable regularities. D.Sharp declines.

3.What do the scientists mentioned in this passage believe about volcanic eruptions?

A.They brought about global warming.

B.They actually partly cooled the surface of the Earth.

C.They melted the ice sheets in Antarctic from above.

D.They dominated human emissions in greenhouse effect.

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This student believes she should be able to control the outcomes of her life by virtue of her hard work. She has a sense that hours on the field should get her exactly where she needs to go. Many students have similar mentality. When they win, they feel powerful and smart. When they fail, they are crushed by self-blame. If my achievements are mine to control, they reason, my failures must be entirely my fault, too.

We talk often about young adults struggling with failure because their parents have protected them from discomfort. But there is something else at play: a false promise that they can achieve anything if they are willing to work for it.

Psychologists have sourced this phenomenon to a misapplication of “mindset” research, which has found that praising children for effort will increase academic performance. A 2018 analysis found that while praising effort over ability may benefit economically disadvantaged students, it does not necessarily help everyone.

One possible explanation comes from Suniya Luthar, who argued in a research paper that for teens in wealthy, pressure-cooker communities, “it is not a lack of motivation and perseverance (毅力) that is the big problem. Instead, it is unhealthy perfectionism, and difficulty with backing off when they should, when the desire for achievements is over the top.” They push themselves onward in face of impossible goals. A 2007 study found that teens who refused to give up impossible goals showed higher levels of C-reaction protein, a marker of systemic inflammation (全身炎症) linked to heart disease and other medical conditions. A 2014 study showed a connection between the perfectionist tendencies and depression.

The cruel reality is that you can do everything in your power and still fail. Instead of allowing our kids to beat themselves up when things don’t go their way, we adults should help students pursue success in healthier ways in part by redefining failure as a feature, not a bug, of learning. At Smith College where I teach, students are asked to explore how setbacks and missteps made them stronger or more effective. We would be wise to remind our kids that life has a way of sucker-punching (意外打击) us when we least expect it. It’s often the people who learn to say “stuff happens” who get up the fastest.

1.Why was star athlete trapped by self-blame?

A.She broke down during the match.

B.She didn’t try her best in the match.

C.She believed hard work should pay off.

D.She thought she should have practiced harder.

2.What can we learn from Paragraph 5?

A.Lack of motivation and perseverance leads to teens’ failure.

B.Praising children for effort increases academic performance.

C.Children struggle with failure due to parents’ over-protection.

D.Unhealthy perfectionism causes physical and emotional stress.

3.According to the author, adults should _________.

A.help students learn from failure

B.protect students from discomfort

C.reward students for their hard work

D.explore the cause of students’ failure

4.Which of the following does the author probably agree with?

A.Effort equals achievement.

B.Motivation is the key to success.

C.Success is not always under control.

D.Effort is more important than ability.

 

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