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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅沙及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:再错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of my dream. Some mention the Chinese Dream. And others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people's life, but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to study hardly from now on, I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.

 

1.mention→mentioned 2.his→their 3.去掉are 4.had→have 5.life→lives 6.respectably→respectable 7.without→with 8.hardly→hard 9.在can后加to 10.which→where 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述作者班级召开了一次关于我的梦想的主题班会,作者的梦想是当一名医生并决定好好学习,为成为医生做好准备。 第一处:考查动词时态。句意:有人提到中国梦。根据时间状语Recently,可知是发生在过去,应用一般过去时,故将mention改为mentioned。 第二处:考查代词。句意:和其他人热情地谈论他们对中国梦的理解。本句的主语是others,后面的形容词性物主代词应和其保持一致,应用their,故将his改为their。 第三处:考查谓语动词。句意:我们都相信这个梦想将来会实现。分析句子可知,主语we和谓语相信之间为主动关系, 再根据句意,are是多余的,故去掉are。 第四处:考查时态。句意:我一直想当医生。根据句中always可知应该用现在完成时,故将had改为have。 第五处:考查名词。句意:医生不仅能挽救人们的生命,而且他们也在做一项值得尊敬的工作。本句中people是集体名词,指人们,后面的生命life也要变为复数形式,故将life改为lives。 第六处:考查词性转换。句意:同上。分析句子可知,本句的respectably修饰名词job作定语,应用其形容词形式,故将respectably改为respectable。 第七处:考查介词。句意:医生可以用他们的专业知识帮助人们过上更好的生活。根据句意,可知本句应为用他们的专业知识帮助人们,故将without改为with。 第八处:考查副词。句意:为了实现我的梦想,我应该从现在开始努力学习,我必须尽可能多地学习进入一所好的医学院, 在那里我可以为医生的工作做好充分的准备。分析句子可知,努力学习为study hard,而hardly意为“几乎不”,根据句意,故将hardly改为hard。 第九处:考查不定式。句意:同上。分析句子可知,I must learn as much as I can后省略动词do,和后面的动词之间应用不定式连接,并且to get into a good medical college在句中作目的状语,故在can后加to。 第十处:考查非限制性定语从句的关系词。句意:同上。分析句子可知,which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor为非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词college,定语从句的关系词在句中作地点状语,应用where,故将which改为where。  
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C.Objective. D.Enthusiastic.

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B.clothing rental will be as successful as Uber

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C.rent clothes rather than buy them

D.make full use of clothes we've possessed

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4.Why did people become nicer and say thank you to delivery drivers after the outbreak erupted?

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C.Because of the outbreak of the epidemic.

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