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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was studying in the UK, my school held a singing contest. I signed up although I really loved singing. I sang with a boy named as Steve. He’s one of my best friend. Unfortunately, I forgot the lyrics for a moment while they sang. I was standing onstage, look nervous. Not surprisingly, we lose the contest. I felt very sadly. Steve comforted me by saying, “There will be another chance.” One week late, at our school’s art festival, we sang a song together again. It was unforgettable and touching afternoon. I want to thank Steve, whom didn’t give up on me when I felt down.

 

1. although→because/as/since 2. 去掉 as 3. friend→friends 4. they→we 5. look→looking 6. lose→lost 7. sadly→sad 8. late→later 9. unforgettable 前∧an 10. whom→who 【解析】 本文为记叙文。主要叙述了作者和好朋友在歌唱比赛中由于自己忘记歌词而失败,后面在好朋友的鼓励下,他们在一周后的学校艺术节是成功地演唱了一首歌,作者由此感谢好朋友。 1.考查语境及连词。句意:我在英国读书时,学校举办了一次歌唱比赛。我报名了,因为我真的很喜欢唱歌。分析句子可知,前后句子是因果关系,而非转折关系,故把although改 为because/as/since。 2. 考查固定用法。句意:我和一个叫史蒂夫的男孩一起唱歌。句中的name是及物动词,后面的as是多余的,故去掉 as。 3. 考查名词的复数。句意:他是我最好的朋友之一。英语中常用one of +名词复数,故把friend改为friends。 4. 考查人称的一致性。句意:我们唱歌的时候,我一时忘了歌词。分析语境可知,是“我”和史蒂夫,是我们,而不是他们,故把they改为we。 5.考查非谓语做状语。句意:我站在台上,看起来很紧张。分析句子I was standing onstage, look nervous可知,本句是单句,其中的look在句中是伴随状语,其逻辑主语是I,l与系动词look二者是主动关系,故要用look的ing形式,故把look改为looking。 6.考查一般过去时。句意:毫不奇怪,我们输了比赛。本文叙述是过去的事,要用一般过去时,故把 lose改为lost。 7. 考查形容词做表语。句意:毫不奇怪,我们输了比赛。我很难过。句中的felt是系动词,后面要用形容词做表语,故把sadly改为sad。 8. 考查语境。句意:一周后,在我们学校的艺术节上,我们又一起唱了一首歌。根据语境可知,此处是指一周后。“later”意为“以后”, 指正在谈论的过去某个时间点之后,常和具体时间段连用。而late意为“后期地。最近地”不能与具体的时间连用,故把late改为later。 9.考查冠词。句意:那是一个难忘而又感人的下午。分析语境可知,此处是指数量“一”,因为unforgettable是以元音开头的,要用不定冠词an,故在unforgettable 前添加an。 10. 考查非限制性定语从句。句意:我要感谢史蒂夫,他在我沮丧的时候没有放弃我。本句是定语从句,其中的Steve是先行词,在非限制性定语从句中作主语,此时要用who,而whom一般作宾语,故把whom改为who。  
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Ants also commute—between their nest and sources of food. The survival of their colonies depends on doing this efficiently.

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1.What does the underlined word “this” in para.2 refer to?

A.Surviving. B.Commuting.

C.Finding food. D.Avoiding jams.

2.How did the researchers control the traffic density of the commuting ants?

A.By finding out the dense points. B.Through closer observation.

C.By controlling the widths of their path. D.By regulating their numbers.

3.According to the research, ants can avoid traffic jams mainly because ________.

A.they follow a special route.

B.they level off at high densities.

C.they never stop or slow down on the way.

D.they depend on their natural chemicals to adjust their speeds.

4.What is the best title of the passage?

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