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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

Many of us were raised with the saying "Waste not, want not". None of us, therefore, can completely avoid waste in our lives.

Any kind of waste was thoughtless, whether we waste our potential talents, our own time, our limited natural resource, our money, or other people's time. Each of us can become more aware of and careful. The smallest good habits can make the big difference. It's a good feeling to know in our hearts we are doing our best in a world what is in serious trouble. By focusing on oil, water, paper, food or clothing, we are playing a part in cutting down on waste.

We must keep reminding us that it is easier to get into something than it is to get out of it. Actually, severe damage done to our land is fair recent in the history of our evolution. It's time for us to say no to waste so that our grandchildren's children will able to develop well.

 

1. therefore→however 2.was→is 3. resource→resources 4. 去掉of 5. the→a 6. what→that/which 7.or→and 8.us→ourselves 9.fair→fairly 10.加be 【解析】 本文是一篇议论文。很多人都知道“勤俭节约,吃穿不愁”然而几乎没有人能够做到不浪费。小习惯会产生很大的影响和作用,我们一定要注意自己微小的习惯,避免浪费。通过聚焦节省石油、水、纸、等方面,我们在减少浪费方面起了很大的作用。我们时刻要提醒自己形成浪费的习惯要不戒掉这个习惯要容易得多。它对我们的环境造成了很大程度的破坏,该是我们对浪费说不的时候了。 1.考查副词。根据句义可知上下文之间是转折关系,所以使用副词however表示转折,前后都需要使用符合隔开。故把therefore改为however。 2.考查时态。句意:任何一种浪费都是轻率的,不管我们浪费了我们的潜在天赋,我们自己的时间,我们有限的自然资源,我们的金钱,还是其他人的时间。结合句意句子用一般现在时态,故把was改为is。 3.考查名词。通常使用复数形式resources,表示具体的资源,在本句中作为动词waste的宾语。故把resource改为resources。 4.考查固定用法。句意:我们每个人都能变得更加清醒和谨慎。be aware of意识到……,此处是形容词做表语,后面没有宾语,故去掉of。 5.考查固定词组。make a difference有影响,有意义。故把the改为a。 6.考查定语从句。句意:在我们的心中,我们在一个陷入严重困境的世界里尽了最大的努力,这是一种很好的感觉。此处a world是先行词,指物,代入后面的定语从句,先行词做主语,故把what改为that/which。 7.考查并列连词。句意:通过关注石油、水、纸张、食品和服装,我们在减少浪费方面发挥了作用。此处是并列的递进关系,故把or改为and。 8.考查反身代词。句意:我们必须不断提醒我们自己,进入某件事比摆脱它更容易。结合句意此处用反身代词,故把us改为ourselves。 9.考查副词。句意:事实上,我们的土地遭受了严重的破坏,这是我们进化历史上的最新情况。此处recent是形容词,副词修饰形容词,故把fair改为fairly。 10.考查固定搭配。句意:是时候让我们说“不浪费”了,这样我们的孙子的孩子就能发育得很好了。be able to do sth.能够做某事,助动词will后面加动词原形,故在will后加be。
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