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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号()并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Chris,

I’m glad to hear you and learn that you are planned to set up a Chinese reading club on your school web. It is really cool. I think it was a good idea to post the relevant information on the internet, which it is helpful for people to know about your club. Also, you can put on some posters on your campus to attract student’s attention. What’s more, organize some reading activities and exchanging that one has gained from the reading will help arouse people’s interest in your club. I hope my suggestion can be of some help to you and your reading club can be a greatly success.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

1.hear后加from 2.planned→planning 3.was→is 4.it去掉 5.on→up 6.student's→students' 7.organize→organizing 8.that→what 9.suggestion→suggestions 10.greatly→great 【解析】 这是一篇应用文。短文中作者对于Chris计划在学校网上建立一个中文阅读俱乐部提出了一些建议。 第一处:考查介词。根据句意“我很高兴收到你的来信,得知你计划在学校网上成立一个中文阅读俱乐部。”本句中涉及hear from sb“收到某人的来信”。故hear后加from。 第二处:考查时态。句意:我很高兴收到你的来信,得知你计划在学校网上成立一个中文阅读俱乐部。分析句意可知,本句为现在进行时。故将planned改成planning。 第三处:考查时态。句意:我认为在网上发布相关信息是个好主意,这有助于人们了解你的俱乐部。本句为一般现在时,宾语从句的主语为it,所以be动词为is。故将was改成is。 第四处:考查定语从句。分析句子可知,本句为非限制性定语,which指代前面的整个句子,且在定语从句中作主语,所以it多余。故将it去掉。 第五处:考查介词。句意:此外,你可以在校园张贴一些海报来吸引学生们的注意。根据句意,表示“张贴”,所以动词短语为put up 。故将on改成up。 第六处:考查名词所有格。句意:此外,你可以在校园张贴一些海报来吸引学生们的注意。学生们的注意力为“students’ attention”。故将student’s改成students’。 第七处:考查动名词。分析句子可知,本句为动名词做主语。故将organize改成organizing。 第八处:考查连接词。分析句子可知,that one has gained from the reading为exchanging的宾语,宾语从句中,缺少连接词作gain的宾语,所以连接词为what。that不做成分,没有意义。故将that改成what。 第九处:考查名词复数。suggestion为可数名词,本句泛指“我的多条建议”所以用其复数形式。故suggestion改成suggestions。 第十处:考查形容词。success为名词,用形容词修饰名词。故greatly改成great。  
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