假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信,表达你对现在使用的英语...

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处, 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删减或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Green，

I'm Li Hua, a student whom you once teach spoken English. Now our school asks me invite you to be a spoken English teacher on the English Summer Camp during the summer holiday. Here is anything about the activity. The camp lasts from July 20 and August 10, 2011. In the morning, you'll give three spoken English classes so you are expecting to prepare different topic to communicate with students. In the afternoon, there're main outside activities such as having some picnics and visit parks and museums, etc. I hope you will accept the invitation even if you have free time.

阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容或括号内单词的正确形式(不多于3个单词).

No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile make1.(us) happy, but also it enables others to feel 2.delight).3.a smile is so powerful that it gives people 4.  (suffer) from disasters great courage.

A little boy5.name) Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people6.a serious earthquake happened in Wen Chuan. Right after he7.(rescue) by the soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine which warmed people who were in8.sad).

It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life 9.(be )colorless and difficult. It is suggested that we10. (smile) as much as possible.

    It was a busy morning, about 8:30, when an elderly gentleman in his 80s came to the hospital. I heard him saying to the nurse that he was in a hurry for all appointment(约会) at 9:30. The nurse had him take a _______ in the waiting area, _______ him it would be at least 40 minutes _______ someone would be able to see him. I saw him _________ his watch and decided, since I was ___________ busy—my patient didn’t _______ at the appointed hour, I would examine his wound. While taking care of his wound, I asked him if he had another doctor’s appointment. The gentleman said no and told me that he _______ to go to the nursing home to eat breakfast with his _______. He told me that she had been _______ for a while and that she had a special disease. I asked if she would be ____________ if he was a bit late. He replied that she __________ knew who he was, that she had not been able to __________ him for five years now. I was ____________, and asked him, “And you __________ go every morning, even though she doesn’t know who you are?” He smiled and said. “She doesn’t know me but I know who she is” I had to hold back __________ as he left.

Now I __________ that in marriages, true love is ____________ of all that is. The happiest people don’t __________ have the best of everything; they just __________the best of everything they have. __________ isn’t about how to live through the storm, but how to dance in the rain.

1.A.breath B.test C.seat D.break

2.A.persuading B.promising C.understanding D.telling

3.A.if B.before C.since D.after

4.A.taking off B.fixing C.looking at D.winding

5.A.very B.also C.seldom D.not

6.A.turn up B.show off C.come on D.go away

7.A.needed B.forgot C.agreed D.happened

8.A.daughter B.wife C.mother D.sister

9.A.late B.well C.around D.there

10.A.lonely B.worried C.doubtful D.hungry

11.A.so far B.neither C.no longer D.already

12.A.recognize B.answer C.believe D.expect

13.A.moved B.disappointed C.surprised D.satisfied

14.A.only B.then C.thus D.still

15.A.curiosity B.tears C.words D.judgment

16.A.realize B.suggest C.hope D.prove

17.A.agreement B.expression C.acceptance D.exhibition

18.A.necessarily B.completely C.naturally D.frequently

19.A.learn B.make C.favor D.try

20.A.Adventure B.Beauty C.Trust D.Life

    Question: I have been learning English for about 7 years. 1. And I still can't make myself understood in English. However, I love learning English. How can I learn English well? Please help me.

Answer: Many people have asked me this question. 2. Here I will give you several tips for learning English.

● 3.

First of all, you must want to learn. If you are not interested in learning English, no class will help you and no book will help you. So you have to be honest with yourself. Ask yourself, “Do I really want to learn English？” If you can't answer “yes” to this question, it is better for you to set English aside until you're ready and willing to learn.

● Set goals (目标)．

To learn English well, you must set some goals. 4. It will also help you to see your progress. Ask yourself, “What are my goals? What areas would I like to improve？” Think about what your goals are, and review once in a while to see that you are making progress toward your goals.

● Practice, practice, and practice.

After you have set your goals, you have a better idea of what you need to practice. Just like the athlete  (运动员）whose goal is the Olympics must train（训练）daily, you as a language learner must practice language every day to make progress toward your goal. 5.

A.I think it is not easy to learn it well.

B.Want to learn.

C.Reading is a very good way to learn new words.

D.Make friends with some Americans online.

E.The more you practice, the more progress you will make.

F.The answers are as different as the people asking the question.

G.Having goals will help you remember what areas you want to work on.

    When we walk through the city, we all experience a kind of information overload but we pay attention only to those that are important to us. We don’t stop, we keep our faces expressionless and eyes straight ahead, and in doing so, we are not just protecting ourselves but are avoiding overloading other people as well.

We make use of stereotypes (刻板的模式) as convenient ways to make quick judgements about situations and people around us. They may not always be accurate, and they can often be dangerously wrong, but they are used regularly.

The problem with the stereotypes is that they restrict experiences. By using limited clues to provide us with a rapid opinion of other people or places we may choose to limit our communication. We may decide not to go to certain places because we believe they will not offer something we enjoy.

In the city, styles of dress are particularly important with regard to self-presentation. Different groups often use clearly identifiable styles of clothes so that they can be easily recognized. It is becoming increasingly common for brand names to be placed on the outside of clothes, and this labeling makes it easy to send out information about fashion and price instantly, and lets others tell at a distance whether an individual has similar tastes and is a suitable person to associate with.

In England, where social grouping or class continues to make social distinctions（区分）, clothes, hairstyles, people’s pronunciation and the manner of speaking are all clues to our social group. Class distinctions tend to be relatively fixed, although in the city where greater variety is permitted, they are more likely to be secondary determining factors of friendship and association.

1.People walking in cities ignore the surroundings because __________.

A.they do not wish to talk to other people B.everyone else is expressionless

C.the environment is already familiar to them D.there is too much information to take in

2.According to the passage, the main disadvantage of using stereotypes is that they __________.

A.are likely to lead us into dangerous situations

B.may make us miss some pleasant experiences

C.can rarely be relied on

D.make us mentally lazy

3.From the passage we may conclude that _________.

A.stereotypes can help to understand people fully

B.people are becoming more interested in fashion

C.dressing can send messages about individuals

D.stereotypes can do more harm than good to people

4.It would appear that in England, a person’s class __________.

A.might be less important in making friends in a city

B.is mainly determined by his pronunciation

C.plays less of a role than it did in the past

D.is something that can be changed easily