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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was twelve, I went to a soccer field for the first time. I found hard to drag myself away from it. But all I could do were to make a paper one instead, so I didn’t have enough money to buy a football. Every day on my way home, I couldn’t help kick whatever on the road could be kicked.

Several weeks late I felt I was on top of the world. While I got homea real black and white ball was waiting for me on my desk, in which was my birthday present from my parents. I was very wild with joy that I didn’t know what to say. I simply rushed out with a ball and playing with other kids until I was completely tired out.

 

1.found后加it 2.were→was 3.so→because/for 4.kick→kicking 5.late→later 6.While→When 7.in去掉 8.very→so 9.a→the 10.playing→played 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。短文叙述了作者12岁时,第一次去足球场,就喜欢上了足球,但是作者没有足够的钱买一个足球,几周之后,作者回家后在桌子上发现了一个足球,这是作者父母给与作者的生日礼物。 第一处:考查代词。分析句子可知,本句为“find+it+形容词+ to do sth ”的用法, it作形式宾语。故found后加it。 第二处:考查主谓一致。all为本句的主语,指事情,谓语为单数。故将were改成was。 第三处:考查连词。根据句意“但我只能做一个纸质的足球,因为我没有足够的钱买足球”,前后句意为因果关系。故将so改成because/for。 第四处:考查动名词。 句意:我情不自禁地踢着路上能踢到的任何东西”。I couldn’t help doing sth“ 情不自禁做某事”。 故将kick改成kicking。 第五处:考查副词。本句表达的是“几周以后”。用two weeks later。故将late改成later。 第六处:考查连词。句意:当我回到家,一个真正的黑白相间的足球在我的桌子上等着我,这是我的父母给我的生日礼物。本句为时间状语从句,“got home”为非延续性动词,所以连词为when。故将While 改成When。 第七处:考查定语从句。分析句子可知,本句为非限制性定语从句,which指代先行词,在定语从句中做主语。故将in去掉。 第八处:考查连词。本句为so…that引导的结果状语从句,其结构之一为:so+形容词/副词+that。故将very改成so。 第九处:考查冠词。根据上文“a real black and white ball”可知,本句特指ball,所以用定冠词the表示特指。故将a改成the。 第十处:考查时态。and连接两个并列的谓语,由“rushed out”可知,and后的动词也为一般过去时。故将playing改成played。  
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18.A.positively B.objectively C.creatively D.conservatively

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