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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My friend David wanted to buy his mother for a Christmas present. When Christmas was around the corner, he took $ 20.00 out of his banks account and went to the shop to look for a perfect gift. Sudden he saw a beautiful brooch (胸针), that was in the shape of his favourite pet. He bought it and wrap the present in Christmas paper and then placed them under the Christmas tree. He felt excite and he was looking forward to Christmas morning to seeing the joy on his mother’s face. And when his mother opened the present, she screamed with fear because she saw a spider.

 

1.去掉mother后的for 2. banks → bank 3. the → a 4. Sudden → Suddenly 5. that → which 6. wrap → wrapped 7. them → it 8. excite → excited 9. seeing → see 10. And → But 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者的朋友大卫想给他妈妈买一件圣诞礼物。他买了一个漂亮的胸针,胸针他最喜欢的宠物的形状。但当他的妈妈打开礼物时,她吓得尖叫起来,因为她看到了蜘蛛。 1.考查及物动词。句意:我的朋友大卫想给他妈妈买一件圣诞礼物。buy sb. sth.“给某人买某物”,不需要加介词。故去掉mother后的for。 2.考查名词。句意:圣诞节就要到了,他从银行户头里拿出20美元,到一家商店去买一份完美的礼物。此处是名词作定语,修饰account,应使用名词单数形式。故banks改为bank。 3.考查冠词。句意:圣诞节就要到了,他从银行户头里拿出20美元,到一家商店去买一份完美的礼物。此处泛指“一家商店”,应使用不定冠词,shop是以辅音音素开头的词,应用a。故the改为a。 4.考查副词。句意:突然他看见一个漂亮的胸针,那是在他最喜欢的宠物的形状。此处修饰句子,应使用副词形式。故Sudden改为Suddenly。 5.考查定语从句。句意:突然他看见一个漂亮的胸针,那是在他最喜欢的宠物的形状。此处是非限定性定语从句,先行词是brooch,指物,在从句中做主语,应使用关系代词which引导。故that改为which。 6.考查动词时态。句意:他买了它,把礼物包在圣诞纸里,然后把它放在圣诞树下。根据语境可知,此处描述是过去的动作,应使用一般过去时。故wrap改为wrapped。 7.考查代词。句意:他买了它,把礼物包在圣诞纸里,然后把它放在圣诞树下。根据前文He bought it可知,此处指代“那个胸针”。故them改为it。 8.考查形容词。句意:他感到很兴奋,他期待着圣诞节的早晨看到母亲脸上的喜悦。此处描述主语he的感情,应使用-ed结尾形容词,意为“感到兴奋的”。故excite改为excited。 9.考查非谓语动词。句意:他感到很兴奋,他期待着圣诞节的早晨看到母亲脸上的喜悦。根据句意可知,此处使用不定式表将来的动作且表示目的。故seeing改为see。 10.考查连词。句意:但是当他的妈妈打开礼物时,她吓得尖叫起来,因为她看到了一只蜘蛛。根据语境可知,此处前后句意存在转折关系,应使用转折连词but。故And改为But。  
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