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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My dog Dino is really an superhero, who helps keep us safely, especially on the roads. Take a look at he did last week. Last Wednesday, Dino saved our neighbor’s boy who run in front of a car to get his ball. People can get very much angry when driving, usually on silly reasons. Last Tuesday, a driver behind us started shouting at my mum when she stopped her car to let several child cross the road. Dino soon made him shut up. Last Friday, Dino saw two girls running a red light but he soon made them changing their minds. Last Sunday Dino caught my dad talking on their mobile phone while my dad was driving. Dino immediately stopped him. What a smarter dog!

 

an—a safely—safe at后加what run—ran 去掉much on—for child—children changing—change their—his/the smarter--smart 【解析】 本文属于记叙文,讲述作者的狗狗Dino是一只超级英雄,一直在路上保证我们的安全。 第一处:考查不定冠词。句意:我家的狗Dino是一个超级英雄,一直在路上保证我们的安全。Superhero为可数名词,同时首字母发音为辅音,故用不定冠词a,把an改为a。 第二处:考查形容词。句意:我家的狗Dino是一个超级英雄,一直在路上保证我们的安全。Keep sb +形容词,故把safely改为safe。 第三处:考查宾语从句。句意:让我们来看看上周他做的事情。分析句子可知,take a look at为及物动词短语,he did last week为宾语从句,但是从句缺乏宾语,故加what。 第四处:考查一般过去时。句意:上周三,Dino拯救了我们邻居家的孩子,当时他冲到车辆前面去拿他的球。分析句子可知,本句讲述上周三的事情,故用一般过去时,把run改为ran。 第五处:考查副词。句意:人们驾车的时候,往往会因为一些很傻的原因而非常生气。修饰angry用very,不用much,故去掉much。 第六处:考查介词。句意:人们驾车的时候,往往会因为一些很傻的原因而非常生气。分析句子可知,因为傻的原因,故把on改为for。 第七处:考查名词复数。句意:当妈妈停车让孩子们先过。分析句子可知,有several修饰,故用可数名词复数,把child改为children。 第八处:考查非谓语动词。句意:上周五,Dino看见两个女孩子闯红灯,他让他们改变了这一行为。本句为make的用法,make sb do sth让某人做某事,而make sb doing sth让某人一直做某事,不符合语境,故把changing改为change。 第九处:考查人称代词或者定冠词。句意:上周日,我爸爸驾车的时候,他发现我爸爸在打电话。本句为短语 on the phone,或者on his phone,故把their改为his 或者the。 第十处:考查形容词。句意:多么聪明的一只狗!分析句子可知,本文没有对比的语境,故不需用比较级,把smarter改为smart。  
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