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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉.

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

My grandpa worked as a carpenter, who has devoted all his energy for carpentry for almost sixty years. Several years before, he began to make wooden models of farm tools. On National Day when I returned back and visited him with my parents, he showed me that he had created. He hopes he could expose people to the traditionally way of farming. Now every day, he prepares raw material in the yard, measures them, and polishes them. I’ve also picked up carpentry as hobby of mine. Now I am able to make a model by me. And I am determined to make it know to more.

 

第一处:worked→ works 第二处:energy后的for→ to 第三处:before→ ago 第四处:去掉back。 第五处:that→ what 第六处:traditionally→ traditional 第七处:material→ materials 第八处:hobby前加a 第九处:me→ myself 第十处:know→ known 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了作者的爷爷做了一辈子的木匠,几年前,他开始制作农具的木制模型,在爷爷的影响下,作者也爱上了木工活并开始制作模型。 第一处:考查时态和主谓一致。句意:我爷爷是一个木匠,他做木匠已经快60年了。陈述的是客观事实,用一般现在时,主语是My grandpa,谓语动词用第三人称单数,故 worked改为works。 第二处:考查固定短语。句意同上,devote to表示“致力于、把……奉献给”,故energy后的for改为to。 第三处:考查before和ago的区别。句意:几年前,他开始制作农具的木制模型。ago用来描述事情发生之后的时间长度,常跟在时间名词之后,故before改为ago。 第四处:考查return的用法。句意:国庆节那天,当我回来和父母一起看望他时,他向我展示了他的作品。return本身就表示“回来、返回”,后面不需再加back,语义重复,故去掉back。 第五处:考查宾语从句。句意同上,分析句结构可知此处为宾语从句,从句中的created缺少宾语,故that改为what。 第六处:考查形容词。句意:他希望他能让人们接触到传统的耕作方式。修饰名词way用形容词,故traditionally改为traditional。 第七处:考查名词的数。句意:现在他每天都在院子里准备原材料,测量并抛光。表示具体的材料时,material是可数名词,此处表示不止一种材料,应该用可数名词复数形式,故material改为materials。 第八处:考查冠词。句意:我也把木工作为自己的一个爱好(我也学会了做木工活)。hobby是发音以辅音音素开头的可数名词,此处泛指“一个爱好”,故hobby前加a。 第九处:考查反身代词。句意:现在我可以自己制作模型了。by oneself表示“独自地”,故me改为myself。 第十处:考查非谓语动词。我决心让更多的人知道它。此处为“make+宾语+宾补”结构,it与know之间是逻辑上的动宾关系,表示被动,用过去分词作宾补,故know改为known。  
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