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I often wanted to look like as the slim girls on TV even though I knew it was impossible. To lose weight, I tried no-fat, low-fat, only bananas — I almost went madly.
Then I read an article what said instead of asking “Am I fat?” I should be asking “Am I fit?” I didn’t know a letter could make such difference! Once I started thinking about fit rather than weight, things began to change. Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed, I adds healthy foods to my meals. I could still have a burger now and then, but I would add a salad or an apple.
Finally, I stopped compare myself with actresses and models. Instead, I made a list of the thing I liked about myself. By being positive about me and my body, I became both happier or healthier.
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Kilns (窑) had to burn day and night in Jingdezhen, a city in Jiangxi province of southeastern China, 1. (meet) demand from around the globe.
Today, though demand is much 2. (low), people are making porcelain the same way they have for hundreds of years, with Jingdezhen’s old masters still 3. (pray) to the kiln gods.
Meanwhile, across town, creative new craftspeople are bringing new 4. (idea) into the art and new life to the once factories and villages. It’s fair to say that Jingdezhen people live and 5. (breath) porcelain, but they aren’t doing it alone.
“Jingdezhen is more than a historical town. The old and new are combined perfectly here.” Says Hu Chunxiao, a local artist 6. family has worked in the industry for generations. The traditional and modern exist in harmony, which makes 7. one of the most interesting towns in China for travel.
Despite being a center of porcelain for 1,700 years, Jingdezhen is never short 8. great natural scenes. The surrounding area is famous for abundant 9. (hide) landscape — mountains, streams, farms and forests. Artists who desire a peaceful life 10. (draw) here since the ancient times.
There is a story from many years ago of a primary school teacher called Mrs. Thompson. On the very first day of her fourth grade class, she told the children a _______ . She looked at her students and said that she _______ them all the same. But that was _______ because there in the front row was a little boy, Teddy Stoddard. Mrs. Thompson had watched Teddy the year before and _______ that he didn’t play well with the other children, his clothes were messy and he constantly needed a _______ She did not like him. Later, it got to the _______ where Mrs. Thompson would actually _______ his papers with a red pen, making bold Xs.
However, when she read his file one day, she was in _______. Teddy's first grade teacher wrote, ''Teddy is a _______ child. He does his work ________ and has good manners.'' His second-grade teacher wrote, ''Teddy is an excellent student. But he is ________ by his mother's terminal illness. '' His third-grade teacher wrote, ''His mother's death has been ________ on him. ''
By now, Mrs. Thompson realized the problem and she was ________ of herself. On the very day, she quit teaching reading and writing. ________, she began to teach children how to be a man.
Mrs. Thompson paid particular ________ to Teddy. As she worked with him, his mind seemed to ________. The more she encouraged him, the faster he ________. Teddy graduated from the school with the highest of ________. Twenty years later, Mrs. Thompson received a ________ telling her she was the best teacher he has ever met in the world. It was ________, Theodore F. Stoddard, MD.
1.A.joke B.lie C.lesson D.story
2.A.loved B.thanked C.needed D.trusted
3.A.true B.impossible C.serious D.incorrect
4.A.admitted B.observed C.expected D.said
5.A.rest B.parent C.bath D.friend
6.A.class B.area C.point D.border
7.A.marked B.refused C.read D.criticized
8.A.sadness B.surprise C.excitement D.pride
9.A.lazy B.funny C.moody D.bright
10.A.neatly B.badly C.vividly D.carelessly
11.A.shocked B.troubled C.thrilled D.caught
12.A.strange B.obvious C.hard D.tight
13.A.scared B.proud C.confident D.ashamed
14.A.However B.Instead C.Therefore D.Though
15.A.attention B.visit C.money D.respect
16.A.come alone B.come up C.come alive D.come across
17.A.acted B.talked C.responded D.moved
18.A.benefits B.states C.records D.honors
19.A.book B.letter C.gift D.visitor
20.A.signed B.written C.listed D.accepted
How to Help a Friend with Depression
If you have a friend who is suffering from depression, you may be unsure about what you should do to help. There are several ways that you can help a friend with depression.
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As soon as you suspect that your friend is suffering from depression, you should encourage him or her to see a doctor. Your friend may be denying that there is a problem or maybe even embarrassed to admit that there is a problem. The extra encouragement of a friend may be all that your friend needs to seek help.
Supporting your friend
Depression can make people feel isolated and like no one cares. Even if you have shown your concern by doing things to help your friend, he or she may need to hear you say that you are there for them in order to believe it. Let your friend know that you are available. 2.
Depression can also make a person feel worthless, but you can use encouraging words to support your friend until your friend remembers his or her worth again. 3.Avoid saying unnecessary things like, “It’s all in your head.” or “Snap out of it!”
Moving beyond depression with your friend
As your friend begins to feel better, keep your friend moving beyond depression by planning some fun outings. 4. And make plans to do those things so that your friend will always have something to look forward to. 5.Recent studies have shown it helps to ease the symptoms of depression and make people who are depressed feel more connected to others. You probably know what makes your friend laugh better than anyone else does, so make sure that you use that knowledge to laugh with them on a regular basis.
A.Those who laugh last laugh best.
B.Choose activities that you both enjoy.
C.Encouraging your friend to talk to you.
D.Helping your friend get treatment for depression.
E.Laughter is known as the best medicine for a reason.
F.Therefore, they can contact you right away if they need you.
G.You could say, “You are such a gifted artist. I really admire your talent.”
During the winter in the Southern Hemisphere, a blue point of light shines overhead. The brilliant point on the sky, which looks like a bright star, is actually two stars in close orbit — accompanied by the closest known black hole to Earth.
The newly discovered black hole is about 1,011 light-years from our solar system in the star system HR 6819. Published today in Astronomy & Astrophysics, the object is locked in an orbit with two visible stars. It is estimated about four times the mass of the sun and about 2,500 light-years closer than the next black hole. “It seems like it’s been hiding in plain sight,” says astronomer Kareem El-Badry, a Ph.D. student at the University of California, Berkeley, who specializes in binary star (双子星) systems but wasn’t involved with the study. “HR 6819 is such a bright star (system) that people have been studying it since the 80s, but it seems like it’s had some surprises.”
“If you find one that is very close to you, and you assume you’re not special, then they must be out there everywhere,” says lead study author Thomas Rivinius, an astronomer at the European Southern Observatory (ESO) in Chile. Researchers have long estimated that the Milky Way is home to hundreds of millions of black holes, objects whose gravitational fields (引力场) are so strong, not even light can escape. But finding these dark objects has proven extremely difficult. Dozens of black holes in the galaxy have been spotted “feeding” on nearby clouds of gas — a process that sends out x-rays as the material moves around the edges of the black hole. But the majority of black holes in our galaxy cannot be seen, so the only way to find them is by observing their gravitational effects on surrounding objects.
In follow-up work, researchers led by study co-author Petr Hadrava aim to study the light given off by HR 6819 and understand the precise identity of the two close stars.
1.What do we know about the newly discovered black hole?
A.It moves with two other stars.
B.It came into being in the 1980s.
C.It weighs much more than earth.
D.It can be seen easily during the winter.
2.What can we infer from Thomas Rivinius’s words in paragraph 3?
A.Most black holes are common.
B.More black holes can be found.
C.Black holes are difficult to learn.
D.Black holes exist in star systems.
3.What will scientists probably do next?
A.Learn more about the two close stars.
B.Analyze the light around the black hole.
C.Observe the influence of black holes on stars.
D.Study the black holes in the system of HR 6819.
4.What is the best title for the text?
A.A New Star System in Universe
B.Two Special Stars in the Same Orbit
C.The Closest Black Hole to the Earth
D.The Biggest Black Hole in the Milky Way
Cryonics is the practice of cooling dead organic tissue. This is used on humans or animals that have recently died. The hope is to bring them back to life in the near future. By law, it can only be performed on humans after they are legally dead. Many scientists and doctors think cryonics is totally morally unacceptable. However, there are also many who support cryonics.
Supporters of cryonics hope that future technology will improve. Molecular technology is especially hoped to reverse (逆转) the early stages of clinical death. It is hoped that this will enable the repair of tissue on a very tiny level. It could also allow damaged tissues and organs to regenerate. They also assume that disease and aging will one day be reversible.
These supporters want to store the memory and identity from the brain of people who have recently died. Cryonics attempts to do this by using liquid that preserves the brain. If this is done before cooling, it will prevent injury. This cooling liquid saves the fine cell structures of the brain where memory and identity exist.
Critics of cryonics think this process is a waste of time and money. They base their opinions on the current level of science. It is true that cells, tissues, blood vessels, and some small animal organs can be reversibly preserved. Some frogs can even survive for a few months in a partially frozen state if they are kept a few degrees above freezing. But this is not true cryopreservation. There is no proof that the identity and memory of a person can be restored after death has occurred.
Critics also think that if it were possible to bring dead people back to life, it would cause many social problems. Critics worry it would cause a huge overpopulation problem. Many also think trying to reverse death is immoral because it is against the will of their God.
1.What can we know about cryonics from paragraph 1?
A.Cryonics is used before people's death.
B.All scientists aren't in favor of the use of cryonics.
C.Laws forbid the use of cryonics on legally dead people.
D.Cryonics tries to cool dead organic tissue by using liquid.
2.What does the underlined word ''regenerate'' in paragraph 2 mean?
A.copy. B.return.
C.freeze. D.regrow.
3.Why do critics oppose the use of cryonics?
A.It will make people's memory lost.
B.Injury will occur during the process.
C.There is scientific uncertainty about it.
D.It goes along with their religious belief.
4.What is the main idea of the text?
A.The use of cryonics has a bright future.
B.Cryonics is still a controversial practice.
C.The practice of cryonics is limited by law.
D.There is an advance in medical technology.
