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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

March 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience in that day. In the morning, we cycled to suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughed all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work hardly. Some were digging holes. Some are carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering it. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding of people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photo to record our green action. Seen the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect or beautify our environment.

 

1.in→on 2.suburbs前添加the 3.laughed→laughing 4.hardly→hard 5.are→were 6.it→them 7.去掉of 8.photo→photos 9.Seen→Seeing 10.or→and 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了作者所在班级在3月12日一起去郊区植树的经历。 1.考查介词。句意:3月12日是值得纪念的,因为那天我们班有一个有意义的经历。表示在具体的某一天应用介词on。“那天”短语为on that day。故in改为on。 2.考查冠词。句意:早上,我们骑车去郊区植树,一路上有说有笑。suburbs此处为特指作者他们去植树的那个郊区,前面应添加定冠词。故suburbs前添加the。 3.考查非谓语动词。laugh的逻辑主语是we,它们之间是主动关系,用现在分词短语作伴随状语。故laughed改为laughing。 4.考查副词。句意:到达后,我们开始努力工作。修饰动词work,应用副词,且表示“努力地”,应用hard;hardly表示“几乎不”。故hardly改为hard。 5.考查时态。结合上文,可知事情发生在3月12日,表示发生在过去的事情,应用一般过去时。故are改为were。 6.考查代词。句意:其他人在给它们浇水。此处指代上文的trees应用代词them。故it改为them。 7.考查动词用法。句意:工作完成后,我们张贴了一个提醒人们保护树木的板。结合句意表示“提醒某人做某事”,句型为remind sb. to do sth.。故去掉of。 8.考查名词的数。photo为可数名词,由some修饰,应用复数形式。故photo改为photos。 9.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构,可知see在句中应用非谓语动词形式,且与逻辑主语we构成主动关系,故用现在分词作状语。故Seen改为Seeing。 10.考查连词。句意:我们觉得保护和美化我们的环境是我们的责任。结合语境,可知上下文为并列关系,应用连词and。故or改为and。  
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