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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My little cousin is greatly interesting in science. And he does some dangerous experiments sometimes. Although his parents want to encourage him to be great scientist, at times they worry about his safety. Last week, if my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurts his thumb. My aunt felt sadly and wanted him to stop from doing that experiment. However, my cousin didn’t want to give up. She said, “Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, so they didn’t give up.” My aunt had to let him finish the experiments and he finally succeeded in finish it.

 

【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述我表弟热爱科学,在一次做实验的时候弄伤了手指,姑姑很担心他,希望他放弃。但他坚持并成功的完成这项实验。 第一处:短语用法错误。短语be interested in对……感兴趣。句意:我的表弟对科学非常感兴趣。故将interesting改为interested。 第二处:冠词用法错误。名词scientist为可数名词,故前用不定冠词a。句意:虽然他的父母想鼓励他成为一名伟大的科学家。故在great前加a。 第三处:连词用法错误。这里为引导时间状语,故用连词when/while。句意:当我表弟在做实验时,他伤了拇指。故将if改为when/while。 第四处:时态用法错误。根据文章的时态可知用一般过去时。当我表弟在做实验时,他伤了拇指。故将hurts改为hurt。 第五处:词性用法错误。系动词felt后接形容词形式。句意:我姑姑很伤心,希望他停止做那个实验。故将sadly改为sad。 第六处:短语用法错误。stop doing sth停止做某事。句意:我姑姑很伤心,希望他停止做那个实验。故将from去掉。 第七处:代词用法错误。这里代指my cousin,故用he。句意:他说:“很多科学家在做实验时受伤了。”故将she改为he。 第八处:连词用法错误。根据前后句之间的逻辑关系可知,这里表示转折关系。句意:但他们没有放弃。故将so改为but。 第九处:名词数用法错误。这里特指前面所做的那个实验,故用单数形式。句意:我姑姑不得不让他完成这项实验。故将experiments改为experiment。 第十处:短语用法错误。短语succeed in doing sth.成功做某事。句意:他成功的完成了它。故将finish改为finishing。  
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