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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写岀该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写岀修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

My uncle, who had been working in a hospital in our city, is great success as a doctor. Last night I went to visit him and told him I was in low spirits because he had failed the maths test again. After hearing that I said, he told me that when he was at school, he wanted to be a doctor. He worked very harder at his lessons and tried to enter to a university. However, something unhappy happened to his family, it forced him to work for a life. But he spent his spare time studying or finally became a doctor. “The secret of success,” he said, “are to never give up whatever difficulty you may meet with in the future.”

 

1. had → has 2.在great前面加a 3. he → I 4. that →what 5. harder → hard 6.去掉to 7. it → which 8. life → living 9. or → and 10. are → is 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了,作者因数学考试不及格去找当医生的叔叔开解,叔叔用自己的学习经历激励作者不要灰心。 1. 考查时态。此处指“我叔叔一直在我市的一家医院工作”,过去发生延续到现在还要持续下去的动作,用现在完成进行时(has/have been doing),主语My uncle是单数。故将had改为has。 2. 考查冠词。此处指“我叔叔当医生是一件非常成功的事”,success指“成功”时,不可数名词,指“一件成功的事或人”时,是可数名词,在本句中success指“一件成功的事”,是可数名词,表泛指,great不以元音音素开头,要加不定冠词a。故在great前面加a。 3. 考查代词。此处指“因为我数学考试又不及格”,应用代词I。故将he改为I。 4. 考查宾语从句引导词。hear后接一个宾语从句,从句缺乏宾语,表“……的事物、什么”,应用连接代词what。故将that改为what。 5. 考查副词。此处指“他很努力地学习功课,想考上大学”,本句并无比较的含义,无需用比较级,应用副词原级。故将harder改为 hard。 6. 考查及物动词。enter是及物动词,后面直接加名词,不用介词。故去掉to。 7. 考查非限制性定语从句关系词。本句为非限制性定语从句,先行词是句子something unhappy happened to his family,指物,在从句中作主语,应用关系代词which。故将it改为which。 8. 考查名词。此处指“然而,他的家庭发生了一些不幸的事情,迫使他以工作谋生。”表示“谋生、生计”,应用名词living。故将life改为living。 9. 考查连词。此处指“但他把业余时间花在了学习上,并且最终成为了一名医生。”前后两句表并列顺承,应用并列连词and。故将or改为and。 10. 考查主谓一致。主语The secret of success是单数,主谓一致,谓语也用单数形式。故将are改为is。  
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