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一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”,请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文...

一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”,请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

1.家庭:

2.工作:

3.业余生活。

注意:1.词数100左右:

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:

3.开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._______________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

 

One possible version: I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful. 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于半开放性作文。要求考生以“十年后的我”为题,写一篇征文。 本文的话题是“十年后的我”,要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用一般将来时和第一人称。因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词,插入语以使文章层次分明,使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等。此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时。 【亮点说明】 本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,避免了文章句式的单一。此外,还用到了较多的高级语法表达,如I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer.(省略that的宾语从句)I'll do a good job in whatever I do.(whatever引导的宾语从句)In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.(比较级+and+比较级连用)等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。  
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