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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

This morning, when I looked out the window, I excitedly found it was snowing heavy. Attracted by the beautiful sight, so I decided to go out to take some photos. As I walked on the path in front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slipping on the snow-covered ground. It was at that moment when I realized what I should do. Immediately, I run back home to get a broom(扫帚) and started to sweep the path. I worked so hard that he sweated a lot. An hour later, a thick snow was cleared away. Looked at the clean path, my neighbor all smiled and gave me the thumbs up.

 

第一处: out后加of 第二处: heavy→heavily 第三处:去掉so 第四处: slipping→slip 第五处: when→that 第六处: run→ran 第七处: he→I 第八处: a→the 第九处: Looked→Looking 第十处:neighbo→neighbors 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了一个下雪的早晨,作者主动打扫楼前甬道上的积雪的故事。 第一处:考查动词短语。句意:今天早上,当我往窗外看时,我兴奋地发现雪下得很大。look out of是固定短语,表示“从……朝外看”,故out后加of。 第二处:考查副词。句意同上,修饰动词snowing用副词,故heavy改为heavily。 第三处:考查连词。句意:我被这美丽的景色所吸引,决定出去拍几张照片。分析句子结构可知,此处使用的是非谓语动词,过去分词Attracted作状语,两分句之间不需要连词,so是多余的,故去掉so。 第四处:考查非谓语动词。句意:我看见一个男孩突然在积雪覆盖的路面上滑倒了。see sb doing sth表示“看到某人正在做某事”,see sb do sth表示“看到某人做某事”,此处强调动作发生过程而不是正在进行,故slipping改为slip。 第五处:考查强调句型。句意:就在那一刻,我意识到我应该做什么。分析句子结构可知本句为强调句型,其基本结构为:it is+被强调部分+that+其余部分,本句强调的是时间状语at that moment,故when改为that。 第六处:考查时态。句意:我立刻跑回家拿了一把扫帚,开始扫甬道上的雪。事情发生在过去,应该用一般过去时,故run改为ran。 第七处:考查代词。句意:我扫得很用力,出了很多汗。根据句意可知此处指“我”而不是“他”,故he改为I。 第八处:考查冠词。句意:一小时后,厚厚的雪被打扫干净了。snow是不可数名词,不能用不定冠词修饰,此处特指“甬道上的雪”,应该用定冠词修饰,故a改为the。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。句意:看着干净的甬道,邻居们都笑了,向我竖起大拇指。look 与neighbors之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,表示主动,用现在分词作状语,故Looked改为Looking。 第十处:考查名词的数。句意同上,neighbor为可数名词,“all”表明此处用可数名词复数,故neighbor改为neighbors。
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