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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday my friends and I did something real interesting — we made the film on my mobile phone. We all had different thing to do. My friends were the actors, but I was the director. My mum provided us with some old clothes and my friends put it on. They looked like very funny. My brother plays the guitar in the film. We watched the film on my computer after get back to my house. It was amazed. Now I have made up my mind become a film director in the future. I’ll do what I can do to make my dream come true.

 

1.real→ really 2. the→ a 3.thing→ things 4.but→ and 5.it→ them 6.去掉like 7.plays→ played 8.get→ getting 9. amazed→ amazing 10.mind后加to 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了作者和朋友们用手机拍电影的有趣经历及其对作者的影响。 第一处:考查副词。句意:昨天我和朋友们做了一件很有趣的事——我们用手机拍了一部电影。修饰形容词interesting用副词,故real改为really。 第二处:考查冠词。句意同上,根据句意可知此处泛指“一部电影”,film是发音以辅音音素开头的可数名词,应该用不定冠词a来修饰,故the改为a。 第三处:考查名词的数。句意:我们都有不同的事情要做(我们都有各自的分工)。different 修饰可数名词复数,故thing改为things。 第四处:考查连词。句意:我的朋友当演员,我当导演。根据句意可知前后是并列而非转折关系,故but改为and。 第五处:考查代词。句意:我妈妈给我们提供了一些旧衣服,我的朋友们把它们穿上了。此处指代前面的old clothes,故it改为them。 第六处:考查look与look like的区别。句意:他们看起来很滑稽。look表示“看起来”,而look like表示“看起来像”,根据句意可知此处应该用前者,故去掉like。 第七处:考查时态。句意:我哥哥在电影里弹着吉他。陈述的是发生在过去(昨天)的事情,应该用一般过去时,故plays改为played。 第八处:考查非谓语动词。句意:回到家后,我们在电脑上看了我们拍摄的电影。介词after后接动名词作宾语,故get改为getting。 第九处:考查ed形容词与ing形容词的区别。句意:它真是太棒了。以ed结尾的形容词修饰人,表示“感到……的”,以ing结尾的形容词修饰物,表示“令人……的”,故amazed改为amazing。 第十处:考查不定式。句意:现在我下定决心将来当一名电影导演。make up one's mind to do表示“下定决心做某事”,故mind 后加to。  
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The study also provides a map of an evolutionary process that many other biologists are researching.

1.What can we learn about caterpillars’ warning structures from the text?

A.They have the same use as hair.

B.They are found in caterpillars’ heads.

C.They are used to fight against strangers.

D.They may have evolved from caterpillars’ legs.

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A.draw a family tree of caterpillars

B.create a map to show how caterpillars evolve

C.study species within the same group of caterpillars

D.make clear the relationship between different species of caterpillars

3.What does the underlined word “They” in the fifth paragraph refer to?

A.The ancient species. B.The chemical markers.

C.The sound-producing structures. D.The more recently evolved species.

4.What is the main idea of the text?

A.How caterpillars evolved.

B.How caterpillars warn strangers.

C.Communication between caterpillars.

D.Caterpillars’ warning signals evolved from walking.

 

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D.Because they make the writer think of some sad experiences.

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A.given up. B.looked for.

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4.What is the best title for the passage?

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