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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.

But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.

阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

In ancient China lived an artist1. paintings were almost lifelike. The artist’s reputation had made him proud. One day the emperor wanted to get his portrait (画像) done so he called all great artists to come and present their 2. (fine) work, so that he could choose the best. The artist was sure he would3.(choose), but when he presented his masterpiece to the emperor’s chief minister, the old nan laughed. The wise old man told him to travel to the Li River～perhaps he could learn a little from the greatest artist in the world.

Filled with 4. (curious), the artist packed his bags and left. 5. he asked the villagers on the banks of the river where he could find the legendary (传奇的) artist, they smiled and 6. (point) down the river. The next morning he hired a boat and set out 7. (find) the well-known painter. As the small boat moved, 8. (gentle) along the river he was left speechless by the mountains being silently reflected in the water. He passed milky white waterfalls and mountains in many shades of blue. And when he saw the mists rising from the river and the soft clouds9. (surround) the mountain tops, he was reduced to tears. The artist was finally humbled (谦卑) by the greatest artist 10. earth, Mother Nature.

    As s businesswoman, I care deeply about my customers. But like anyone for whom you feel affection, _______ can also drive you mad. They’ll come rushing in, _______their handbag’s been stolen. They’ll _______ that they left it in the changing room, create havoe (混乱) and then _______ it had been in their car all the time. They’ll have out half the _______ in the shop, and want the only style you don’t have left in a _______ colour. I do know how upset the shop staff can get, but I try to persuade them to keep _______.

I remember the first really _______ customer we had at Covent Garden. She was _______ absolutely everything, nothing was right and I was rather ________ that she became a “regular”. After a while, she ________ for the way she behaved at the beginning. She had split up with her husband the week before, was living in a flat ________, and since she’d found it too much to cope with (应对), she’d taken it out on ________ people.

That taught me a valuable ________ and I pass it on to the people who ________ in the market. Don’t take it ________. If a customer is rude or difficult, just think “Maybe she’s had a row with her husband. Maybe her child’s not ________.” Always water it down and don’t let your ego (自我) get ________. If you do, you won’t be able to ________ it and the whole thing develops into an unpleasant scene and that ________ everyone’s day.

1.A.shopkeepers B.customers C.salespersons D.receptionists

2.A.saying B.pretending C.guessing D.replying

3.A.agree B.promise C.imagine D.swear

4.A.forget B.decide C.discover D.assume

5.A.foods B.catalogues C.belongings D.goods

6.A.particular B.different C.matching D.natural

7.A.fighting B.smiling C.waiting D.changing

8.A.generous B.polite C.careless D.difficult

9.A.curious about B.displeased with C.patient with D.uncertain about

10.A.relaxed B.delighted C.surprised D.embarrassed

11.A.searched B.argued C.prayed D.apologized

12.A.by chance B.by herself C.on purpose D.on duty

13.A.rude B.such C.other D.lonely

14.A.lesson B.trick C.skill D.trade

15.A.work B.shop C.meet D.quarrel

16.A.kindly B.secretly C.personally D.casually

17.A.ready B.away C.up D.well

18.A.out of sight B.in the way C.behind the scene D.above the law

19.A.stress B.expect C.handle D.blame

20.A.ruins B.makes C.starts D.saves

    A housewarming party is a special party to be held when someone buys or moves into a new apartment or house. The person who bought the house or moved is the one who throws the party. The party is a chance for friends and family to congratulate the person on the new home. 1. And it is good time to fill the new space with love and hopeful presents.

2. Some people register a list of things they want or need for their new home at a local stores. Some common things people will put on a gift registry include kitchen tools like knives and things like curtains. Even if there isn’t a registry, a good housewarming gift is something to decorate the new house with, like a piece of art or a plant.

3. This is often appreciated since at a housewarming there isn’t a lot of food served. There are usually no planned activities like games at a housewarming party. The host or hostess of the party will, however, probably give all the guests a tour of their new home. Sometimes, because a housewarming party happens shortly after a person moves into their new home, people may be asked to help unpack boxes. 4.

Housewarming parties get their name from the fact that a long time ago people would actually bring firewood to a new home as a gift. 5. Now most homes have central heating and don’t use fires to keep warm.

A.This isn’t usual though.

B.It is traditional to bring a gift to a housewarming party.

C.You can also bring food or drinks to share with the other guests.

D.If you’re lucky enough to receive gifts, keep them in a safe place.

E.It also gives people a chance to see what the new home looks like.

F.The best housewarming parties encourage old friends to get together.

G.This was so that the person could keep their home warm for the winter.

    We are the products of evolution, and not just evolution that occurred billions of years ago. As scientists look deeper into our genes (基因), they are finding examples of human evolution in just the past few thousand years. People in Ethiopian highlands have adapted to living at high altitudes. Cattle -raising people in East Africa and northern Europe have gained a mutation (突变) that helps them digest milk as adults.

On Thursday in an article published in Cell, a team of researchers reported a new kind of adaptation - not to air or to food, but to the ocean. A group of sea-dwelling people in Southeast Asia have evolved into better divers. The Bajau, as these people are known, number in the hundreds of thousands in Indonesia, Malaysia and the Philippines. They have traditionally lived on houseboats; in recent times, they’ve also built houses on stilts (支柱) in coastal waters. “They are simply a stranger to the land,” said Redney C. Jubilado, a University of Hawaii researcher who studies the Bajau.

Dr. Jubilado first met the Bajau while growing up on Samal Island in the Philippines. They made a living as divers, spearfishing or harvesting shellfish. “We were so amazed that they could stay underwater much longer than us local islanders,” Dr. Jubilado said. “I could see them actually walking under the sea.”

In2015, Melissa Ilardo, then a graduate student in genetics at the University of Copenhagen, heard about the Bajau. She wondered if centuries of diving could have led to the evolution of physical characteristics that made the task easier for them. “it seemed like the perfect chance for natural selection to act on a population,” said Dr. Ilardo. She also said there were likely a number of other genes that help the Bajau dive.

1.What does the author want to tell us by the examples in paragraph 1?

A.Environmental adaptation of cattle raisers. B.New knowledge of human evolution.

C.Recent findings of human origin. D.Significance of food selection.

2.Where do the Bajau build their houses?

A.In valleys. B.Near rivers. C.On the beach. D.Off the coast.

3.Why was the young Jubilado astonished at the Bajau?

A.They could walk on stilts all day. B.They had a superb way of fishing.

C.They could stay long underwater. D.They lived on both land and water.

4.What can be a suitable title for the text?

A.Bodies Remodeled for a Life at Sea B.Highlanders’ Survival Skills

C.Basic Methods of Genetic Research D.The World’s Best Divers