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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、 删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was raining hardly outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties, which brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children. But what had the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parent should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you?

1._________

2._________

3._________

4._________

5._________

6._________

7._________

8._________

9._________

 

1.hardly→hard 2.passed→passing 3.在in和fifties中间添加her 4.which→who 5.our→their 6.had→have 7.parent→parents 8.or→and 9.How→What 【解析】 本篇是记叙文,描述雨天妈妈给自己送饭,表达对父母养育之恩的感谢。 1. 考查副词。hard本身词性是形容词,hard表示“猛烈地”,副词形式还是hard, 而hardly的意思是“几乎不”,故把hardly改成hard。 2. 考查非谓语动词。see sb doing sth表示看见某人正在做某事,现在分词作宾语补足语表示动作正在进行,此处表示看到一个熟悉的身影正进过我们的教室,所以这里pass应该用doing形式。故把passed改成passing。 3. 考查固定短语。in one’s +数字复数表示“在某人多少岁”,这里缺少物主代词,故在in和fifties中间添加her。 4. 考查定语从句。本句是非限制性定语从句,先行词是my mother, my mother在从句做主语成分,所以选who或that, 但由于本句是非限制性定语从句,所以只能用who。故把which改成who。 5. 考查物主代词。句意:在中国许多父母为他们的孩子做出了巨大的牺牲。根据句意这里many parents是第三人称复数,应该用their。故将our改成their。 6. 考查时态。这里可以根据前一句用的是make, 属于一般现在时,这里也用现在的时态,用现在完成时表示这些孩子们之前做的事情对现在的影响。故将had改成have。 7. 考查名词复数。这里是他们的父母,需要用复数形式。故将parent改成parents。 8. 考查连词。句意:亲爱的爸爸和妈妈。在肯定句表示“和”用and,否定句用or。故把or改成and。 9. 考查疑问词。句意:我能为你做什么?根据句意可知问的是“什么”, 应该用what, 故把how改成what。
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16.A.changed B.discussed C.spread D.kept

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18.A.skirt B.hand C.hair D.quilt

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B.By dropping in erasers.

C.By standing on the wood.

D.By removing the wood.

2.What does the author mean by “the birds handled awkwardly” in paragraph 4?

A.They were unable to tell different shapes.

B.They dropped objects only into narrow tubes.

C.They were not aware of the snack at first sight.

D.They mostly avoided the easier way to get the snack.

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A.Stories of Aesop’s Fables.

B.The development of crows.

C.Crows’ intelligence.

D.Human-animal communication.

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C.To explain trees are quite supportive to each other.

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A.Anxious and bold.

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D.Adaptable and supportive.

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A.Give warnings. B.Offer assistance.

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4.Where does this text most probably come from?

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