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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was born as poor boy and grew up in the street without the care, guidance and supervision of your beloved parents. I have been experienced a hard life, being almost naked(赤裸的) with an empty stomach and exist without secure shelter and proper education. Now, as a young man with some sadly experiences of early life, I have a dream. I want to become a great man who have power and authority, like Abraham Lincoln, Benjamin Franklin, Winston Churchill or so on. Yes, I dream to be like these great man. I want to change and developed my beloved country, when people in need can live a happy and peaceful life.

 

1.as后添加a 2.your→my 3.去掉been 4.exist→existing 5.sadly→sad 6.have→has 7.or→and 8.man→men 9.developed→develop 10.when→where 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。主要说明了作者出身贫寒,在街头长大,过着艰难的生活,却有成为一个有权力和权威的伟人的梦想。作者想改变和发展自己心爱的国家,让需要帮助的人可以过上幸福和平的生活。 1.考查冠词。boy为可数名词,此处表示泛指应用不定冠词,且poor为辅音音素开头的单词故用a。故as后添加a。 2.考查代词。句意:我出生贫寒,在街头长大,没有我的父母的关心、指导和监督。根据句意,此处应该是指“我的”的父母应用my。故your改为my。 3.考查动词语态。此处动词experience与主语I为主动语态。故去掉been。 4.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知exist在句中应用非谓语动词形式作伴随状语,与逻辑主语I构成主动关系,故用现在分词形式,与being一致。故exist改为existing。 5.考查形容词。此处是修饰名词experiences,应用形容词sad作定语。故sadly改为sad。 6.考查主谓一致。在定语从句中动词要与先行词man保持一致,man为单数,时态为一般现在时,故谓语动词应用has。故have改为has。 7.考查连词。句意:我想成为一个有权力和权威的伟人,像Abraham Lincoln,Benjamin Franklin,Winston Churchill等等。结合句意表示“等等,诸如此类”短语为and so on。故or改为and。 8.考查名词的数。man为可数名词,由these修饰可知,此处要用其复数形式。故man改为men。 9.考查非谓语动词。句意:我想改变和发展我心爱的国家,让需要帮助的人过上幸福和平的生活。结合句意表示“想要做某事”短语为want to do sth.,此处develop与 change保持一致。故developed改为develop。 10.考查定语从句。句意同上。此处是非限制性定语从句,先行词是country,在后面从句中作地点状语,故用关系副词where。故when改为where。  
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