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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In the beginning of the new term, our school organized military training. In the first three day, our instructor taught us how to walk and stood like a real soldier. On the last day of military training, we were honoring for our achievements. Through our efforts, they won the first prize. After the four-day military training, my classmates and I was expressed our thanks for our instructor’s hardly work. He not only taught us how to behave like a soldier but also showed us meaning of honor or teamwork. Never will I forget that he taught me.

 

1.In→At 2.day→days 3.stood→stand 4.honoring→honored 5.they→we 6.去掉was 7.hardly→hard 8.us后添加the 9.or→and 10.that→what 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了在新学期的军训中的收获及感触。 1.考查介词。句意:在新学期初,我们学校组织了军训。结合句意表示“起初,伊始”短语为at the beginning of。故In改为At。 2.考查名词的数。day为可数名词,由three修饰应用复数形式。故day改为days。 3.考查非谓语动词。根据上文how to walk and可知此处为“how+不定式”结构,and连接并列的成分,故stand应用原形。故stood改为stand。 4.考查非谓语动词。句意:在军训的最后一天,我们为自己的成绩感到光荣。动词honor表示“给予表扬(或奖励、头衔、称号)”,与主语we之间为被动关系,此句为被动结构,应该用过去分词形式。故honoring改为honored。 5.考查代词。句意:通过我们的努力,我们赢得了一等奖。本文用了第一人称来叙述新学期所经历的事情,结合前面“通过我们的努力”可知,获得了一等奖的应该是“我们”而不是“他们”,应用we。故they改为we。 6.考查动词语态。本句中动词expressed(表达)与主语I之间为主动关系。故去掉was。 7.考查形容词。此处修饰名词work,应该用形容词hard作定语,hardly为副词,表示“几乎不”。故hardly改为hard。 8.考查冠词。此处meaning特指“荣誉与团队合作的意义”,前面需要加定冠词。故us后添加the。 9.考查并列连词。句意:他不仅教会了我们如何像一个士兵一样行动,还向我们展示了荣誉和团队合作的意义。结合语境可知“荣誉”与“团队合作”之间为并列关系而不是选择关系,应用连词and。故or改为and。 10.考查连接词。forget后面接宾语从句,that在名词性从句中不担任句子成分,而此处引导词在从句中作taught的宾语,应该用what。故that改为what。  
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D.When a dancer is dancing to music.

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D.Kids give empathy with their emotional needs met first.

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D.Whether kids can be trained to be more empathetic.

 

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