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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was a Sunday afternoon. My parents and I were watching TV excited when suddenly I spotted the pigeon on the balcony. It was a white pigeon with a ring around one of its foot. It rested there quietly, refuse to fly away. Realizing it must have been lost its way back home, I managed call the Pigeon Association up for help. In the same time, my parents brought the pigeon inside and gave it some bird food, what helped refresh it. Before long, the owner got the message but came to take the pigeon back. He thanked us a lot. My parents and I both felt happy for what we had done.

 

1.excited→excitedly 2.the→a 3.foot→feet 4.refuse→refusing 5.去掉been 6.call前添加to 7.In→At 8.what→which 9.but→and 10.both→all 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了一个星期天下午,一只鸽子迷路飞到了作者家的阳台上,作者和父母帮助它找到主人的故事。 1.考查副词。修饰动词watch应用副词excitedly,表示“激动地”。故excited改为excitedly。 2.考查冠词。句意:我的父母和我正在看电视,突然,我看到一只鸽子在阳台上。pigeon为可数名词,此处表示泛指,pigeon是以辅音因素开头的,应用不定冠词a,故the改为a。 3.考查名词的数。foot为可数名词,鸽子有两只脚应用复数形式。故foot改为feet。 4.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知refuse在句子应用非谓语动词形式,且与逻辑主语It构成主动关系,故用现在分词作状语。故refuse改为refusing。 5.考查动词语态。句意:意识到它肯定是在回家的路上迷路了,我设法打电话给鸽子协会寻求帮助。it与lost为主动关系,用主动语态,故去掉been。 6.考查固定短语。根据短语manage to do sth.表示“设法做某事”。故call前添加to。 7.考查介词。根据短语at the same time表示“与此同时”。故In改为At。 8.考查定语从句。此处为非限制性定语从句修饰先行词bird food,从句中缺少主语,指代物,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,应用关系代词which。故what改为which。 9.考查连词。句意:没过多久,鸽子的主人收到了消息,就来把鸽子带了回去。结合上下文可知此处为承接关系,应用连词and。故but改为and。 10.考查代词。句意:我的父母和我都为我们所做的感到高兴。both表示“两者都”,此处“父母和我”数量大于二应用代词all。故both改为all。  
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