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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句话中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。

Dear Chris,

I’m sorry to hear that you have been in hospital for several day. Actually, it’s very easily for a person like you to get sick, since you aren’t used to the new environment. Even worst, you don’t take enough exercise. Here are some tips for you：

First of all, it’s good idea to take part in some social activities, that will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures. On addition, you should try hardly to reduce the pressure of work by listening to music and making friends. Last but not least, you’d better to exercise more instead of sit in the office all the time.

I hope that my advice will help you lead a healthy lifestyle and we will recover soon.

Yours Truly,

Li Hua

    I started serving the homeless when I was eight years old. I didn't know these people would make such a big difference in my _______.

Twice a month I go to the church and help get things ready for _______. When the gate is opened, people come in _______ to get drinks. They take their seats while breakfast is _______， and then we begin to _______. We each take two plates and carry them _______ the line as the plates are _______. Each person receives several kinds of foods. I walk to the tables and _______ the plates before them. After I've served them, I ask if they need _______ else and bring them whatever they ask for.

When I first started serving, I was a little   ________ . At first I stayed close to my mom most of the time, but after I got to know these strangers, I  ________ that they were friendly people. And the ________ of them was often nicer than the outside. I realized that there was no ________ to be scared. After serving for a few months, I started to ________ seeing the same people each week.

All of these people make my day much ________. The past two years have made a big ________ in my life. I do this ________ it is the right thing to do. When I serve people, I want them to know that someone  ________  them and that they matter. Serving makes me happy, but even more ________， it teaches me to love and ________ others and helps make the world a better place.

1.A.study B.work C.family D.life

2.A.breakfast B.brunch C.lunch D.dinner

3.A.secretly B.quickly C.slowly D.separately

4.A.ordered B.enjoyed C.prepared D.tasted

5.A.eat B.serve C.leave D.try

6.A.before B.beyond C.above D.along

7.A.emptied B.washed C.filled D.dried

8.A.make B.set C.fix D.show

9.A.nothing B.everything C.what D.anything

10.A.surprised B.embarrassed C.scared D.puzzled

11.A.realized B.admitted C.claimed D.swore

12.A.past B.inside C.surface D.front

13.A.way B.doubt C.reason D.wonder

14.A.get tired of B.take charge of C.get down to D.look forward to

15.A.better B.further C.busier D.easier

16.A.success B.difference C.profit D.fortune

17.A.because B.if C.once D.though

18.A.relies on B.goes after C.cares about D.looks for

19.A.necessarily B.interestingly C.honestly D.importantly

20.A.respect B.forgive C.inspire D.protect

    Much meaning can be conveyed clearly with our eyes, so it is often said that eyes can speak.

1.In a bus you may look at a stranger, but not for too long. And if he sensed that you are staring at him, he may feel uncomfortable.

The same is true in our daily life. If you are stared at for more than necessary, you will look at yourself up and down to see if there is anything wrong with you. 2.. Eyes do speak, right？

Looking too long at someone may seem to be rude and aggressive.3.. If a man stares at a woman for more than 10 seconds and refuses to look away from her, his intentions are obvious. He wishes to attract her attention, and let her know that he is admiring her.

However, when two persons are engaged in a conversation, the speaker will only look into the listener’s eyes from time to time to make sure that the listener does pay attention to what the former is speaking.4. If a speaker looks at you continuously when speaking as if he is trying to control you, you will feel awkward. A poor liar usually exposes himself by looking too long at the victim.

5. On the contrary, it will give him away.

Actually, eye contact should be made based on specific relationship and situation.

A.If nothing goes wrong, you will feel annoyed at being stared at that way.

B.That’s what normal eye contact is all about.

C.Actually, continuous eye contact is limited to lovers only.

D.Do you have such a kind of experience?

E.But things are different when it comes to staring at the opposite sex.

F.He wrongly believes that looking straight in the eye is a sign of honest communication.

G.After all, nobody likes to be stared at for quite a long time.

    You might think male models lead glamorous lives, filled with endless travel and invitations to socialize with the rich and beautiful. Almost everyone has formed an unrealistic picture of their lives, believing that they spend one afternoon beside the Mediterranean Sea sipping coffee and getting suntanned and the next moment they are on board flying to Rome. However, according to a 2016 documentary made by the pop culture news site Fusion, the financial reality of male models is not very pretty.

The main subject of the documentary, titled Unglamorous, is a male model named Cameron Keesling who went to New York to start his career, hoping to make a fortune in the world of models. Keesling is not a supermodel but he has certainly made his name known in the industry. He was “working in the industry for about a year before landing the cover of Italian Vogue” in 2014. But “Keesling and his companions were paid nothing for the efforts”, Fusion reporter Nikita Redkar wrote.

Keesling also appeared at Paris Fashion Week and won lots of praise, while his compensation wouldn’t even cover the cost of traveling to and from Paris.

According to the documentary the most common way models get paid is by receiving free clothes, rather than money. In order to make ends meet, consequently, many of them have to take another job simply to make a living. Many of these models are in debt. Once they find an agency to represent them, a living income is provided by the agency to accommodate their rent, food, clothing and other expenses. Models are expected to pay off these costs once they find work, but many of the industry’s jobs don’t pay at all. Believe it or not, there is a pay gap between male models and female counterparts. Based on a survey conducted by Fortune.com, female models can make millions more than males, especially if you compare the top ten earners of each gender.

1.In common people’s eyes, male models are living __________.

A.a busy and simple life B.a tiring and dull life

C.an easy and comfortable life D.a hard and embarrassing life

2.Why does the author mention Cameron Keesling in the second paragraph?

A.To introduce his real life

B.To explain why he went to New York

C.To illustrate the hardship of male models’ lives

D.To encourage models to make a fortune in New York

3.What does the underlined word “counterparts” mean in the last paragraph?

A.Friends B.Peers

C.Schoolmates D.Opponents

4.What is the writer’s attitude towards the lives of the male models?

A.Supportive B.Doubtful

C.Critical D.Objective

    In my profession as an educator and health care provider, I have worked with numerous children infected with the virus that causes AIDS. The relationships that I have had with these special kids have been gifts in my life. They have taught me so many things, but I have especially learned that great courage can be found in the smallest of packages.

Tyler was born infected with HIV and from the very beginning of his life, he was dependent on medications to survive. When he was five, he had a tube surgically inserted in a vein in his chest. This tube was connected to a pump, which he carried in a small backpack on his back. Medications were prepared inside this pump and were continuously supplied through this tube to his bloodstream. At times, he also needed supplemented (补充的)oxygen to support his breathing.

Tyler wasn’t willing to give up one single moment of his childhood to this deadly disease. It was not unusual to find him playing and racing around his backyard, wearing his medicine - laden backpack and dragging his tank of oxygen behind him. Tyler’s mom often teased him by telling him that he moved so fast she needed to dress him in red. That way, when she peered through the window to check on him playing in the yard, she could quickly spot him.

This fateful disease eventually wore down Tyler. He grew quite ill and, unfortunately, so did his HIV - infected mother. When it became apparent that he wasn’t going to survive, Tyler’s mom talked to him about death. She comforted him by telling Tyler that she was dying too, and that she would be with him soon in heaven.

A few days before his death, he whispered to me, " I might die soon. I’m not scared. When I die, please dress me in red. Mom promised she’s coming to heaven, too. I’ll be playing when she gets there, and I want to make sure she can find me."

1.What do we know about the tube inserted in Tyler’s chest?

A.It contained oxygen that helped Tyler breathe freely

B.Medications in the pump could be supplied through it

C.It was filled with medications that Tyler needed

D.It should be replaced by a new one after a year

2.Tyler’s mom dressed him in red in order to _______.

A.stress the importance of the color

B.find him as quickly as possible

C.meet the demand of him

D.encourage him to play and race happily outdoors

3.Tyler’s mom helped him face the death in the following ways except that _______.

A.she said to him that it would not long before she died

B.she promised to meet him in heaven soon

C.she had a frank talk with him about death

D.she gave him a medicine-loaded package

4.Which of the following might be the best title for the text?

A.Gifts in My Life B.A Fateful Disease

C.Dying in Red D.No More Tears in Heaven