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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）画掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday afternoon after playing the tennis, I was about to leave the sports club while I saw Emma. She is a cleaner in her sixty. She was talking to the owner of the club Mr. Black, asking some money. Her hand ached bad and she wanted to see a doctor. Mr. Black made some excuses and walks away.

I felt sorry for her. Although I was outside the club, I turned back and opened her wallet. I knew I didn't have many, but I gave her whatever came out in my hand but said, “Emma, please see a doctor.” After that, whenever meet me, she smiles to me and says, “Hello, Gina.”

    Since the age of three, Chelsie Hill had dreamed of becoming a dancer. The only thing that she loved was dance. That____nearly ended one night in 2010, when Hill was in a car accident that put her in the hospital for 51 days and left her____from the waist down. For most people, that would have ____ any hope of a dancing career. For Hill, it was the ___. Far from being an obstacle, her wheelchair made her brave and _____. She wanted to prove to her community and to herself that she was still "normal" , whatever normal _____ .

Normal for her meant dancing, so Hill did it in her____right alongside her non — disabled high school dance team. Half of her body was ___her, and she had to move it with her hands. It ______ took a lot of learning and patience.

After graduation, Hill wanted to____her dance network to include women like her. She ____ people online who had suffered various spinal cord injuries （脊髓损伤）and shared her _____, and she invited them to dance with her. The experience was so _____ .

Hoping to____more people in a larger city, Hill moved to Los Angeles and formed a team of dancers with __ she called the Rollettes. She wants to break down the fixed general____of wheelchair users and show that dance is dance, whether you're walking or you’re _____

Hill has____what many of us never will: her childhood dream. She's a dancer. Every year she____a dance camp for wheelchair users of all ages. And in 2019, 173 ______ from ten countries attended.

1.A.ambition B.idea C.performance D.attempt

2.A.separated B.absent C.disabled D.destroyed

3.A.found B.raised C.built D.ruined

4.A.ending B.beginning C.suffering D.shortcoming

5.A.comfortable B.energetic C.confident D.aggressive

6.A.lacked B.hid C.required D.meant

7.A.wheelchair B.room C.school D.hospital

8.A.made for B.exposed to C.taken away from D.knocked out of

9.A.hardly B.eventually C.surely D.originally

10.A.expand B.learn C.attend D.distribute

11.A.hired B.met C.cured D.fed

12.A.secret B.sorrow C.trouble D.determination

13.A.amazing B.frightening C.boring D.puzzling

14.A.urge B.inform C.remind D.reach

15.A.talents B.disabilities C.qualifications D.dreams

16.A.usage B.glory C.report D.impression

17.A.dancing B.rolling C.sinking D.shaking

18.A.transformed B.achieved C.abandoned D.understood

19.A.registers B.misses C.holds D.introduces

20.A.participants B.students C.volunteers D.patients

    Water skiing is an exciting water sport that can be a ton of fun. You will get to have a thrilling adventure every time you go out on the water. 1. However, once you do, water skiing is a sport you can enjoy whenever you have a boat and enough flat water.

2.Every water skier needs water skis — these are different from snow skis and they also differ depending on the size of the skier and the experience level of the skier. Of course, no one can water ski alone, so you will need to find at least two people to go with you on your water skiing adventure. You and everyone you go with will have more fun if the friends you go with also want to water ski. 3. After you have the boat, the people, and the skis, you will also need a water skiing cable and a life jacket.

For your first time water skiing, you may want to either take a lesson from an expert or find a friend that has experience and is willing to teach you.4.The observer rides in the boat, but watches the water skier for any signals and helps the driver know when to start and stop.

Once you get going and are able to water ski with ease, you will discover that there are many different types of water skiing. Most people just enjoy regular water skiing, but you may want to check out some of these more specialized types of water skiing. 5.

A.You need a boat, naturally.

B.It takes a little patience to learn.

C.The idea is to ski on the surface of the water.

D.Your ski tips should be pointing out of the water.

E.Before you start water skiing, there are a few supplies you' 11 need.

F.Of your two helpers, you need one to drive the boat and one to observe.

G.In trick skiing, the water skier attempts gymnastic-like tricks while water skiing.

    More than half of the birds in Washington are at risk of extinction because of climate change. That's according to a new national report from the Audubon Society, which gives detailed analysis of climate effects on about 600 species of North American birds.

It's based on more than 140 million observations of birds across the US, Mexico and Canada. Audubon scientists looked at the likely effects of sea-level rise, urbanization, drought, extreme spring heat, increased fires, heavy rain and other factors.

But it doesn't just spell out a doomsday scenario (世界末日).Instead, it offers a range of effects and warming, depending on how much carbon humans add to the atmosphere.

"It is truly an existential threat (威胁), not only to birds but to people,” said Doug Santoni, board chair of Audubon Washington, who looked into the report as soon as it came out.

Santoni says he was struck to see the vulnerability (脆弱)of a common “ backyard bird" , the dark-eyed junco. It's one that many first-time birders become familiar with as they learn how to identify species based on their markings and other traits. Currently in Washington, you can count on juncos to show up at your feeder, year round. Extreme spring heat, increased fires and heavy rain are the kinds of changes that will force birds like these north, or kill them off if they fail to adapt.

Trina Bayard, director of bird conservation at Audubon’s Washington chapter, says, "It's certainly a very serious warning report," but adds that there’s still hope. “If we can stabilize current temperatures and decrease our emissions (排放), we can really reduce the effects to these birds …that's very motivating. ”

1.What can we know about the new report?

A.It analyses the species of birds in detail.

B.It's issued by watching 600 bird species.

C.It shows the end of North American birds.

D.It reports the threat some birds are facing.

2.What may Santoni probably agree with?

A.Climate change is a threat only to birds.

B.It's too late to take action to save the birds.

C.The current situation of the birds is worrying.

D.It's common that birds are affected by climate change.

3.Which of the following can help these birds according to Trina?

A.Lowering present temperatures.

B.Reducing our daily emissions.

C.Making them adapt to climate change.

D.Encouraging people to protect them.

4.What can be the best title for the text?

A.Climate change threatens many Washington bird species.

B.A new report about 600 species of North American birds.

C.Different attitudes towards the situation of bird species.

D.Climate change makes different kinds of species at risk.

    The cognitive health and development of boys may be affected by their mothers’ body mass index ( BMI) (体重 指数) while pregnant with them, according to research from Columbia University and the University of Texas at Austin.

The study, which was published in the journal BMC Pediatrics on Friday, observed 368 subjects from low-income African American and Dominican women during the second half of their pregnancies, and then evaluated their children three and seven years later. Researchers found that the sons of women whose BMIs indicated that they were overweight or obese when they became pregnant were more likely to show less developed athletic skills as 3-year-olds and lower intelligence as 7-year-olds compared to boys whose mothers were at “normal” weights during pregnancy.

Among boys, the study found, mothers’ overweight and obesity connected with IQ scores between 4.6 and almost 9 points lower than those of boys whose mothers’ weights were in the “normal” range before pregnancy. Researchers did not observe the same phenomenon among daughters whose mothers had been obese.

“These findings aren’t meant to shame or scare anyone,” Elizabeth Widen, assistant professor of nutritional sciences at UT Austin and one of the study’s co-authors, said in a press release. “We are just beginning to understand some of these interactions between mothers' weight and the health of their babies.”

Why mothers’ obesity appeared to affect childhood IQ was unclear, but earlier research has suggested that there is a relationship between a mother’s diet and her child’s later IQ, according to Columbia University. Researchers did not control for what the mothers ate, the press release noted.

The study’s authors wrote that because childhood IQ has been shown to be an indicator of later success in life, studying how a mother’s obesity could affect the IQ of her child is worthwhile.

1.How did researchers carry out the study?

A.By measuring mothers’ body mass index.

B.By watching mothers and babies for years.

C.By comparing 3-year-old babies with 7-year-olds.

D.By evaluating the health of mothers and their babies.

2.What's the main purpose of the study?

A.To show links between mothers’ weight and babies’ IQ.

B.To make those overweight mothers shameful and scared.

C.To warn some fat mothers to keep a balanced diet.

D.To persuade more obese mothers to lose weight.

3.What do the researchers think of the study?

A.Doubtful. B.Worrying.

C.Significant. D.Interesting.

4.In which section of a newspaper may the text appear?

A.Entertainment. B.Novel.

C.Education. D.Health.