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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字的符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

1.What he wanted then was to lead the simple life.

2.Bob preferred to stay at home rather than to go out.

3.It’s our duty to defence our country against enemies.

4.Visitors get closely to the parts of the world they have never experienced.

5.We finally managed to make the villagers convince of the value of science.

6.On his way to the airport, it occur to him that he had forgotten his passport.

7.What is known to all, Yuan Longping is considered as a pioneer for all people.

8.Only Lily walked into the office did she realize that she had left the contract at home.

9.If he keeps borrowing money to pay off his debts, he’ll be much badly off than he is now.

10.When you feel nervous, you’d better listen to some light music to put yourself with ease.

 

1.the→a 2.去掉第二个to 3.defence→defend 4.closely→close 5.convince→convinced 6.occur→occurred 7.What→As 8.Only后加when 9.badly→worse 10.with →at 【解析】 1. 考查冠词。句意:他所以希望的就是过上简单的生活。在这句话中简单生活是泛指概念,并且是第一次出现,所以要用不定冠词。simple又是辅音音素开头的,所以用a。故将the改为a。 2. 考查固定搭配。句意:鲍勃宁愿呆在家里也不愿出去。我们用固定搭配“prefer to do sth. rather than do sth.”来表示“宁愿做某事而不做某事”,所以go前面的to是多余的。故删去第二个to。 3. 考查动词。句意:保卫国家不受敌人攻击是我们的责任。在这句话中it作形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式,所以to后面要跟动词原形defend。故将defense改为defend。 4. 考查固定搭配。句意:游客可以接近他们从未经历过的世界。我们用固定搭配“get close to”来表示“接近、靠近”含义,所以这里需要的是close。故将closely改为close。 5. 考查非谓语动词。句意:我们终于使村民们相信科学的价值。在这句话中已经有了谓语动词,所以这里的convince要以非谓语的形式出现。在这里convince是作the villagers的补语,然后表达的含义是“村民被说服”,所以需要用过去分词convinced作补语。故将convince改为convinced。 6. 考查时态。句意:在去机场的路上,他突然想起忘了带护照。通过后文的had forgotten使用了过去完成时可知,主句的时态应该是一般过去时。并且occur这个词无被动语态,所以这就应该用occur的过去式。故将occur改为occurred。 7. 考查定语从句。句意:众所周知,袁隆平被认为是所有人的先驱。在这句话中先行词是后文的那句话,且位于句首,这时候只能用as引导定语从句。故将What改为As。 8. 考查时间状语从句。句意:当莉莉走进办公室时,她才意识到她把合同忘在家里了。根据句首的only以及后文的did可知,这里使用了only+状语置于句首,主句要部分倒装的结构。可知did之前是一个状语从句。根据句意可知,这里表达的是“当……时候”这个含义,所以需要在only后加when,引导时间状语从句。故在only后加when。 9. 考查形容词比较级。句意:如果他继续借钱还债,他的情况会比现在差得多。根据后文的than可知,这里需要用badly的比较级worse。故将badly改为worse。 10. 考查固定搭配。句意:当你感到紧张时,你最好听些轻音乐来放松一下。我们用固定搭配“at ease”来表示“舒适、自由自在”;而“with ease”则表示“轻松地、不费力地”。在这里表达的意思是听“音乐会让你放松”,所以用at ease更恰当。故将with改为at。
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