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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I am a little girl, I wanted to be a film star. I thought it would be cool to be in the middle of the stage. I used to thinking if I became a film star, I would make many money and lead a happy and rich life. But I changed my dream. Over the recently months, I have seen many doctors and nurses who tried their best save others despite the danger they face and tiredness. They are real hero in our society. They are the most beautiful people in your heart, who, as a matter of fact, deserves our highest respect. I have been made up my mind to be one of them and to be an useful person.

 

1.am→was 2.thinking→think 3.many→much 4.recently→recent 5.save前加to 6.hero→heroes 7.your→my 8.deserves→deserve 9.去掉have后的been 10.an→a   【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了自己对未来成为什么样的人的心理变化过程。 1.考查动词时态。句意:当我还是个小女孩的时候,我想成为一名电影明星。根据语境可知,此处描述的小时候的事情,应使用一般过去时。故am改为was。 2.考查动词。句意:我曾经想如果我成为一个电影明星,我会赚很多钱,过着快乐而富有的生活。used to do sth.“过去常常做某事,曾经做某事”。故thinking改为think。 3.考查形容词。句意同上。many修饰可数名词,much修饰不可数名词,money是不可数名词。故many改为much。 4.考查形容词。句意:最近几个月来,我看到许多医生和护士不顾危险和疲劳,尽最大努力抢救他人。此处修饰名词,应使用形容词。故recently改为recent。 5.考查非谓语动词。句意同上。此处是短语try one’s best to do sth.“尽最大努力去做某事”。故save前加to。 6.考查名词复数。句意:他们是我们社会真正的英雄。根据They are可知,此处使用名词复数。故hero改为heroes。 7.考查代词。句意:他们是我心中最美丽的人,事实上,他们值得我们最高的尊重。根据语境可知,此处描述的作者的感受,使用应使用my。故your改为my。 8.考查动词时态及主谓一致。句意同上。as a matter of fact是插入语,此处是定语从句的谓语动词,who指代主语they,而且描述的是目前的认识,应使用一般现在时。故deserves改为deserve。 9.考查动词语态。句意:我已经下定决心要成为他们中的一员,做一个有用的人。make up one’s mind to do sth.“下决心做某事”,此处是主动语态。故去掉have后的been。 10.考查冠词。句意同上。此处泛指“一个有用的人”,应使用不定冠词,useful是以辅音音素开头的,应使用a。故an改为a。  
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