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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( Λ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday was my best friend Li Ming’ s birthday. When school is over, I went to the bookshop. I bought a book calling “Exploring space”, and had it wrapped for him. Since he had wanted to buy this book for many week, I knew that he would be very pleased with my present.

While I got to the party, Li Ming said ‘hello’ to me with big smile. I noticed that there were many presents on the floor, but I was sure that mine would be her favourite. I gave the present to Li Ming but whispered in his ear, ‘You will love it’. He could not wait to unwrap it. Sudden, the smile on his face disappeared. I looked and I saw some big words on the cover of the book said, Caring for Your Baby! I had picked up out the wrong in the shop!

 

第一处:is→ was 第二处:calling→ called 第三处:week→ weeks 第四处:While→ When 第五处:big前加a 第六处:her→ his 第七处:but→ and 第八处:Sudden→ Suddenly 第九处:said→ saying 第十处:去掉out 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了作者为好朋友挑选了一本书作为生日礼物,结果却拿错书的有趣经历。 第一处:考查时态。句意:放学后,我去了书店。根据上一句中的“Yesterday”可知,事情发生在过去,应该用一般过去时,故is改为was。 第二处:考查非谓语动词。句意:我买了一本叫《探索太空》的书并打了包装。a book与call之间是逻辑上的动宾关系,表示被动,用过去分词作后置定语,故calling改为called。 第三处:考查名词的数。句意:因为他已经想买这本书好几个星期了,我想他会对我的礼物很满意的。many修饰可数名词复数,故week改为weeks。 第四处:考查when与while的区别。句意:当我到达聚会时,李明带着一个大大的微笑向我打招呼。while引导时间状语从句时,从句中的动词必须是延续性动词,而when引导时间状语从句时,从句中的动词可以是终止性动词,本句应该用后者,故While改为When。 第五处:考查冠词。句意同上,表示“具体的笑容、微笑”时,smile是可数名词,big的发音以辅音音素开头,此处泛指“一个大大的微笑”,应该用不定冠词a修饰,故big前加a。 第六处:考查代词。句意:我注意到地板上有很多礼物,但我肯定他最喜欢我的礼物。根据第一段中的“him”可知,李明是个男孩,故her改为his。 第七处:考查连词。句意:我把礼物给了李明,并在他耳边小声说:“你会喜欢的”。根据句意可知,“gave ”与“whispered”之间是并列而非转折关系。故but改为and。 第八处:考查副词。句意:突然,他脸上的笑容消失了。修饰整个句子用副词,故Sudden改为Suddenly。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。句意:我定睛一看,看到这本书的封面上写着几个大字:照顾你的孩子,天哪,原来我在书店里拿错书了。big words 与say之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,表示主动,用现在分词作后置定语,故said改为saying。 第十处:考查动词短语。句意同上,pick up表示“拿起、捡起”,pick out表示“挑出”,根据句意可知此处应该用前者,故去掉out。  
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