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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Our school encouraged is to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I’ve learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.

 

【解析】 本文属于记叙文,讲述作者参与学校的一份职业体验经历,让作者学到了很多东西。 第一处:考查一般过去时。句意:一些同学选择当超市里的收银员,或者餐厅服务员。根据文章可知,作者陈述过去的事情,故用一般过去时,故把choose改为chose。 第二处:考查并列连词。句意:一些同学选择当超市里的收银员,或者餐厅服务员。本句为结构either…or或者…或者,故把and改为or。 第三处:考查名词。句意:我是参加活动的500个学生之一。one of后接可数名词复数,故把student改为students。 第四处:考查动词不定式。句意:我觉得成为一家照相馆的助理,因为我喜欢拍照。本句为decide的用法decide to do sth决定做某事,故在decided 后加to。 第五处:考查状语从句。句意:我觉得成为一家照相馆的助理,因为我喜欢拍照。分析句子可知,本句为原因状语从句,故用because,而because of后接短语,故去掉of。 第六处:考查冠词。句意:在一个高级摄影师的帮助下,我开始日常工作的打开我的想象。advanced photographer为可数名词,advanced为元音发音开头,故用an,故把a改为an。 第七处:考查形容词。句意:我也培养了一些实用的技能,这些技能对我未来面对挑战来说很有必要。修饰名词用形容词,故把practically改为practical。 第八处:考查代词。句意:我也培养了一些实用的技能,这些技能对我未来面对挑战来说很有必要。分析句子可知,本句阐述这份工作对作者本人的意义,故用me,故把them改为me。 第九处:考查主谓一致。句意:我学到的最重要的事情就是在得到梦想工作之前要提升自己。分析句子可知,本句主语为the most important thing,为单数形式,故谓语用第三人称单数,故把are改为is。 第十处:考查连词。句意:我学到的最重要的事情就是在得到梦想工作之前要提升自己。分析句子可知,after I get my dream job为时间状语从句,作者还没有得到梦想工作,但是需要提升自己,故把after改为before,也可以用until。  
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