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Dear Peter,
I am writing to telling you something about a new column (专栏) in the school newspaper, that is called “Sharing”.
This column is opened to help the students to reduce pressure and face challenges brave. I think this column benefits we a lot. First, it provided a place where we can communicate with others and express our feelings. Besides, we can ask for a help from teachers and friends when we feel puzzling. I believe we will be able to solve our problem with the help of others.
I am sure the column is good our mental health. We will live happily whether we keep a good state of mind.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
There is an old suitcase in my house which represents the dreams and hopes of my family.
I’m always taking photos of the little _______ I find in the world around me. A few weeks ago, I visited my parents. My father was an _______ when he was young. I took a photo of something that I would _______ as a pretty big wonder. At first _______, it might not look like much. It was just a _______ brown suitcase with two silver locks up on the top. But to me, it’s _______ what a miracle (奇迹) looks like.
That suitcase is the very one my dad brought with him when he _______ to the US from Turkey in 1965. He was just a 19-year old boy at the time who didn’t know a _______ of English. He _______ all his friends and family, ________ that he would become an excellent engineer one day. That suitcase carried my dad’s most valuable ________ — many black-and-white photos from home and his science and math textbooks, etc.
As a kid, I was ________ about the suitcase. It lived on the top of my bookcase. I never ________ much about it, though. It wasn’t until I got ________ that I actually asked my dad about it. Looking inside, I found tons of photos and the ________ my parents wrote to each other, back and forth between the US and Turkey.
That’s when I ________ how beautiful that dirty old suitcase actually was. It’s a ________ of not only the hardships my parents ________, but also all the wonderful things they ________. How they found love, how their dreams ________ and how they got through them all.
1.A.secrets B.numbers C.wonders D.suitcases
2.A.artist B.architect C.author D.engineer
3.A.see B.act C.use D.serve
4.A.thought B.time C.light D.sight
5.A.lovely B.common C.special D.strange
6.A.hardly B.exactly C.normally D.quickly
7.A.turned B.wrote C.moved D.returned
8.A.word B.name C.card D.sign
9.A.left B.missed C.refused D.called
10.A.fearing B.hoping C.speaking D.learning
11.A.achievements B.prizes C.things D.lessons
12.A.unsuitable B.unhappy C.uncomfortable D.unclear
13.A.cared B.read C.described D.talked
14.A.stronger B.thinner C.older D.braver
15.A.books B.letters C.papers D.reports
16.A.showed B.praised C.admitted D.realized
17.A.reminder B.source C.result D.cause
18.A.got B.suffered C.won D.deserved
19.A.wanted B.lost C.expressed D.experienced
20.A.turned out B.ended up C.came true D.woke up
Reasons Why Reading Old Books Is Good
There are many people who prefer new books to old ones, because they think that new books are better. 1.
They have stood the test of time. 2. According to C.S. Lewis, as a writer, he would rather want a reader to read an old book than a new one as the new one is still under test and the reader is amateur to judge it.
3. Old books usually cost less in comparison, and at times are available even for free at book stores, thrift shops (旧货店), or book fairs.
They help you know your past. Classic novels teach a lot about a particular previous time in history while we are enjoying present times.
Their quality is better. The title is self-explanatory. 4. If a book is being read even 50 years after it was published, then it’s a classic, and surely good.
They don’t discriminate (歧视) against age. Old books are for everyone and not for a particular age group. 5. Cinderella (《灰姑娘》) can still be your favorite nighttime read as an adult.
They smell so good. The smell of old books is just too good. Don’t you just love the smell as you bury your nose into the pages of an old classic?
A.They are cheaper.
B.They are easy to get.
C.What makes a book a classic?
D.What is a book affecting you most?
E.You need not be a child to enjoy the classics written for kids.
F.But the fact is that the opposite is true, more often than not.
G.Ideas come and go, but only the best ideas are the ones that stand out.
The United States will have more adults aged 65 and over than children by the year 2035, the US Census Bureau says As the American population ages, the demand for services and care for older adults is growing.
SenCura is a company that provides non-medical at-home care for seniors in the northern Virginia area. Cliff Glier founded the company 12 years ago. He says its services include help with bathing, transportation, getting dressed and planning and preparing meals.
Hollie is one of SenCura’s professional caregivers. She visits 88-year-old Olga Robertson’s home every day for three hours. Robertson says she likes having Hollie’s help.
“Well, she cooks for me and she does a good job. She takes me to appointments (约会) and things like that and whatever I want to do. Sometimes, we go to walk in the mall if it’s cold out in the winter time.”
But when Hollie is not around, Robertson still has a caregiver—a robot named Rudy, who can have a conversation and also tells jokes and plays games and dances with Robertson.
In addition to keeping Robertson mentally and physically active, Rudy provides services 24 hours a day. He watches for lost things, reminds Robertson about her doctor’s appointments and tells her when it is time to take her medicine. The robot is a little more than one meter tall. It has a screen that makes checking in with family and caregivers easy.
Anthony Nunez is the founder of INF Robotics, the company that created Rudy. He says the idea for the robotic caregiver was inspired by what his own mother lived through when his grandmother got older.
SenCura’s Cliff Glier met Nunez and his team at an event more than a year ago. He became interested in introducing Rudy to his own customers. Glier says Rudy is not competition for human caregivers. He says the robot is there to help but cannot do all the things that caregivers do, like bathing and dressing seniors.
1.What does the company SenCura do?
A.It focuses on care service for seniors. B.It supports medical research projects.
C.It develops robots helping poor seniors. D.It provides medical services for seniors.
2.Which of the following can not the robot Rudy do?
A.Talk with seniors. B.Dress seniors.
C.Tell jokes. D.Play games with seniors.
3.What inspires Anthony Nunez to invent the robot Rudy?
A.The change in the population of the United States.
B.The fast development of modern science and technology.
C.The work experience from a professional caregiver called Hollie.
D.His mother’s experiences of looking after his grandmother.
4.What’s the best title of the text?
A.The American Population Ages Seriously
B.Professional Caregivers for Seniors Are Popular
C.INF Robotics Invented New Robots for Children
D.New Caregivers for Seniors
If you’re looking at Mercer’s top 20 livable cities as inspiration for your holiday, you would miss out many great places. According to Mercer’s latest Quality of Living Survey, Moscow ranks 167 and Beijing only 119, yet both provide visitors great pleasures. Meanwhile high-ranked cities such as Kobe or Seattle may be easy places to live in, but offer little excitement to tourists.
Actually, many of the world’s most livable cities are a little dull. The world isn’t dashing to visit Canberra or Montreal. In fact, none of the world’s 10 most visited cities appear in Mercer’s top 20. Obviously, considerations for enjoyable holiday hotspots are different from those that make cities comfortable places to live in.
This should be no surprise, since the various livability lists aren’t concerned with tourists or even native people. Mercer, for example, is a Britain-based consulting company whose lists provide multinationals with information about where to start their businesses. “The success of international business is mainly influenced by necessary things such as ease of travel, communication, personal safety and good public services,” says Slagin Parakatil, who leads Mercer’s research. “In short, Mercer’s rating is mainly determined by whether the cities are attractive to businesses, and have good schools, hospitals and nice offices.”
Still, Mercer’s Quality of Living Survey has its uses for tourists, since it also looks at natural and cultural environments and entertainments. It ranks public transport and infrastructure (基础设施) particularly high, a consideration shared by the World Economic Forum in reports on tourism and travel competitiveness. This includes hotels, rental-cars and even ATM numbers, all of which make a place friendly to businesses and visitors.
1.Which city is attractive to tourists according to the text?
A.Canberra. B.Montreal.
C.Moscow. D.Kobe.
2.What does the underlined word “multinationals” in paragraph3 refer to?
A.Foreign tourists. B.International companies.
C.Native businessmen. D.Consulting organizations.
3.What is important to both businesses and tourists?
A.Big banks. B.Good hospitals
C.Nice schools. D.Easy public transport.
4.What does the author say about Mercer’s Quality of Living Survey?
A.It has little use for tourists and businessmen.
B.It may not be the best guidance for tourists.
C.It ranks business environments too high.
D.Businesses and tourists can rely on it for plans.
Glenn, born in 1921, grew up in Ohio. He started his flying career (生涯) as a fighter pilot for the US Marine Corps. He won medals for his brave service in World War II (1939-1945) and the Korean War (1950-1953). After that, Glenn took a dangerous job as a Marine Corps test pilot, flying new planes to see if they were safe. In 1957, he set an air-speed record by flying from Los Angeles to New York in less than three and a half hours.
In the late 1950s, a “space race” began between the US and the Soviet Union. Both countries wanted to be the first to send a human into space, including to the moon. In 1959,Glenn became one of the seven test pilots chosen to take part in the US’s first space program.
In 1961, the Soviet Union became the first nation to send a person into space. Glenn’s chance to go into space came on February 20, 1962. By that time, another American, Alan B. Shepard, had flown in space, but he had not circled the earth. Glenn’s flight was aired live on television and radio.
Glenn’s flight showed that the US space program was as good as the Soviet Union’s. He became a hero. Cities across the country threw parades (游行) for him, and President John F. Kennedy invited him to the White House.
In 1974, Glenn was elected to Congress. Glenn returned to space in 1998, when he was 77. He spent nine days on the space shuttle (航天飞机) Discovery. Glenn went so that scientists could study the effects of space travel on older people. He holds the record for being the oldest person in space.
“Glenn spent his life breaking barriers (障碍),” said President Barack Obama. The president also praised Glenn for inspiring future leaders in space exploration.
1.What did Glenn do in 1959?
A.He won gold medals. B.He took part in world wars.
C.He joined the US’s first space program. D.He flew from Los Angeles to New York.
2.Why was Glenn welcomed as a hero?
A.He started the race between the US and the Soviet Union.
B.He succeeded in circling the earth.
C.He defeated Alan B. Shepard in the competition.
D.He broke the speed record.
3.Why did Glen return to space in 1998?
A.To break a new record. B.To test a space shuttle.
C.To make his last space travel. D.To be tested by the scientists
4.From the last paragraph we can learn that ________.
A.Alan B. Shepard had circled the earth by 1962
B.Glenn has made great contributions to space exploration
C.the US is the first nation to send a human into space
D.Barack Obama called on people to explore space
