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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The summer holiday is coming, that makes me excited. I had been looking forward relaxing myself. l’d like to go swimming, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. It will surely be a wonderful time! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me to go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.

 

第一处: that→which 第二处: had→have 第三处: forward后面加to 第四处: movie→movies 第五处: play the basketball中去掉the 第六处: different →differently 第七处: fallen→fall 第八处: Beside→ Besides 第九处: keeping→kept 第十处: him→them 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了作者盼望已久的暑假即将到来,作者期待着放松一下自己,并制定了各种各样的出行计划。然而,作者的父母担心作者的安全,不让作者出去。作者不想作笼中之鸟,决定努力说服父母。 第一处:考查非限制性定语从句。这里含有一个非限制性定语从句,修饰前面整个主句内容,关系词在从句中作主语,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,用which引导该从句,所以that改成which。 第二处:考查时态。句意:我一直期待着放松一下自己。表示过去的动作或状态持续到现在并且已经完成或可能持续下去,用现在完成时,所以had改成have。 第三处:考查固定短语。句意:我一直期待着放松一下自己。look forward to 期待,该短语是固定短语,所以forward后面加to。 第四处:考查名词复数。句意:我想去游泳,爬山,看几场电影。movie是可数名词,被several修饰,用名词复数,所以movie改成movies。 第五处:考查冠词。句意:我想我可以和我的同学打篮球。表示球类运动的名词前,不用冠词,所以play the basketball中去掉the。 第六处:考查副词。句意:然而,我的父母却不这么认为。修饰动词think,用副词,所以different 改成differently。 第七处:考查动词。这里含有一个宾语从句,在宾语从句中,是情态动词will后,跟了几个并列的谓语动词构成的一般将来时,这几个动词都应该用动词原形,所以fallen改成fall。 第八处:考查副词。句意:此外,他们担心我会迷路。beside在旁边;besides此外,根据句意,这里表示“此外”,所以Beside改成 Besides。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。这里含有一个分词作后置定语,修饰bird,“鸟”和“关在笼子里”之间是被动关系,用过去分词作定语,所以keeping改成kept。 第十处:考查代词。句意:为了获得更多的自由,我将努力说服他们。这里指代上文的my parents,所以him改成them。  
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