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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多右两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉

修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意:I. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

When I was young, I dreamed of becoming many things. Sometimes, I wished I was a astronaut going up into space, finding new planets but jumping around in a cool space suit. Other times, I imagined that being a cowboy in the Wild West, wearing stylish cowboy boots. On other occasions, I pretended to being a famous footballer, using my skills score lots of goals for my favourite team. Growing up with siblings also helps, combining our ideas and putting our thought into action. I was even able to create entirely plots in my head, using nothing more than my brain.

Looked back, I realize the imagination is a wonderful thing in your life.

 

1. a → an 2. but → and 3. 去掉that 4. being → be 5.在score前面加to 6. helps → helped 7. thought → thoughts 8. entirely → entire 9. Looked → Looking 10. your → my 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了,作者小时候梦想成为很多人,富有想象力在生活中是一件美妙的事情。 1. 考查冠词。句意:有时,我希望自己是一名宇航员,到太空去寻找新的行星,并且穿着一身酷的太空服四处跳跃。此处泛指“一名宇航员”,astronaut以元音音素开头,应用不定冠词an表泛指。故将a改为an。 2. 考查连词。句意:有时,我希望自己是一名宇航员,到太空去寻找新的行星,并且穿着一身酷的太空服四处跳跃。此处going up into space,finding new planets与jumping around in a cool space suit之间为并列关系而不是转折关系,应用并列连词and连接。故将but改为and。 3. 考查固定搭配。imagined doing sth.(想象做某事),并非接从句,连接词that是多余的,应去掉。故去掉that。 4. 考查动词。固定搭配pretend to do sth(假装做某事),应用动词原形。故将being改为be。 5. 考查动词不定式。句意:在其他场合,我假装是一个著名的足球运动员,用我的技术为我最喜欢的球队进了很多球。此处用动词不定式(to do)表目的,不定式符号to不可省略。故在score前面加to。 6. 考查时态。文中整体时态为过去时,叙述过去的事情,此处应与整体时态一致,用一般过去时。故将helps改为helped。 7. 考查名词的数。句意:与兄弟姐妹一起成长也有帮助,将我们的想法结合起来并付诸行动。thought(想法、看法),可数名词,此处指”我们的想法”,应用复数 thoughts。故将thought改为thoughts。 8. 考查形容词。此处用形容词作定语修饰名词plots,应用形容词。故将entirely改为entire。 9. 考查现在分词。Looked back, I realize the imagination is a wonderful thing in your life本句已有谓语动词realize且无连词,另一个动词要用非谓语形式,动词look与主语I之间是主谓关系,应用现在分词(doing)表主动,作状语,首字母大写。故将Looked改为Looking。 10. 考查人称代词。句意:回首往事,我意识到想象力在我的生活中是一件美妙的事情。此处应与主语I保持一致,指“在我的生命中”,用人称代词my。故将your改为my。  
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