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Li Hua and I were neighbours and we went to same school. We always went to school together. We were good friend and had a great deal to share with every day. However, one day, Li Hua copied my homework, which made me such angry that I did not want to be friends with him any long. Then on Monday morning I ran downstairs without realize it was raining, but there was no time to return home to fetch an umbrella. It happens that Li Hua was just around the corner and he offered to share her umbrella with me. He made an apology to me in a gently voice. I forgave him but gave him a hug.

    Life will be peaceful if you always do kind things. I teach my daughters to develop a habit of _______ others. The little acts of _______ give you opportunities to provide service for others. They can make you remember how _______ it feels to be kind and helpful.

We _______ in a rural (乡村的) area. Most of what we _______ is beautiful nature. One of the exceptions to the _______ is the rubbish that some people throw out of their car windows as they drive along the rural roads. One of the few _______ of living there is the lack of _______ public services, such as rubbish collection, which is common in the _______.

A helping behavior that I practice regularly with my daughters is __________ rubbish in our neighborhood. My daughters often have a match to see who can collect the most rubbish. They will often say to me in a(n) __________ voice, “There’s some rubbish, Daddy —__________ the car!” And if we have time, we will often get out of our car and pick it up. __________ it may seem strange, we do it. In fact, we __________it. We pick up rubbish in parks, on sidewalks, almost anywhere.

One day I saw a stranger picking up rubbish on the road. I stopped. He __________ his head and smiled, “I saw you doing this with your family. It’s a good __________ to protect our environment.”

There are many other ways to __________ kindness for others. You may share a dinner with a beggar, visit __________ old people in the nursing home, or help the blind __________ the street. You can think of something that can be finished __________ but helpful. It is fun, self­satisfying, and what’s more, it can set a good example. Helping others is helping yourself.

1.A.watching B.welcoming C.helping D.teaching

2.A.kindness B.peace C.cruelty D.interest

3.A.sad B.unusual C.rare D.great

4.A.work B.live C.travel D.stay

5.A.see B.dream C.need D.develop

6.A.environment B.beauty C.area D.weather

7.A.favorites B.disadvantages C.wishes D.mercy

8.A.comfortable B.modern C.necessary D.excellent

9.A.city B.village C.sky D.street

10.A.looking for B.picking up C.taking apart D.laughing at

11.A.surprised B.tired C.excited D.angry

12.A.speed B.start C.move D.stop

13.A.Although B.But C.And D.Since

14.A.enjoy B.experience C.forget D.understand

15.A.covered B.lowered C.shook D.raised

16.A.sport B.idea C.result D.question

17.A.provide B.debate C.describe D.make

18.A.amazing B.fancy C.healthy D.lonely

19.A.clean B.cross C.deserve D.draw

20.A.suddenly B.impossibly C.easily D.hardly

    Tips for Cooking on a Tight Schedule

From my experience, there are three main reasons why people don't cook more often：ability, money, and time. 1.Money is a topic I'll save for another day. So today I want to give you some wisdom about how to make the most of the time you spend in the kitchen. Here are three tips for great cooking on a tight schedule：

1. Think ahead. The moments when I think cooking is a pain are when I'm already hungry and there's nothing ready to eat. So think ahead of the coming week. When will you have time to cook? Do you have the right materials already? 2.

2. Make your time worth it. When you do find time to cook a meal, make the most of it and save yourself time later on. Are you making one loaf of bread? 3. It takes around the same amount of time to make more of something. So save yourself the effort for a future meal.

3. 4.This may surprise you, but one of the best tools for making cooking worth your time is experimentation. It gives you the chance to hit upon new ideas and recipes that can work well with your appetite and schedule. The more you learn and the more you try, the more ability you have to take control of your food and your schedule.

Hopefully that gives you a good start. 5.And don't let a busy schedule discourage you from making some great changes in the way you eat and live!

A.Try new things.

B.Ability is easily improved.

C.Make three or four instead.

D.Understand your food better.

E.Cooking is a burden for many people.

F.Let cooking and living simply be a joy rather than a burden.

G.A little time planning ahead can save a lot of work later on.

    I am a strong believer that if a child is raised with praise, he will learn to love himself and will be successful in his own way.

Several weeks ago, I was doing homework with my son in the third grade and he kept standing up from his chair to go over the math lines. I kept asking him to sit down, telling him that he would concentrate better. He sat but seconds later, as if he didn’t even notice he was doing it, he got up again. I was getting frustrated, but then it hit me. I started noticing his answers were much quicker and accurate (准确的) when he stood up. Could he be more intent (专心的) while standing up?

This made me start questioning myself and what I had been raised to believe. I was raised to believe that a quiet, calm child was a sure way to success. This child would have the discipline (纪律) to study hard, get good grades and become someone important in life.

Now those same people perhaps come to realize that their kids are born with their own sets of DNA and personality traits (特点) and all you can do is loving and accepting them. As parents, throughout their growing years and beyond that, we need to be our kids’ best cheerleaders, guiding them and helping them find their way.

I have stopped asking my son to sit down and concentrate. Obviously, he is concentrating just in his own way and not mine. We need to learn to accept our kids’ ways of doing things. Some way may have worked for me but doesn’t mean we need to carry it through generations. There is nothing sweeter than being individual (个人的) and unique (独一无二的). It makes us free and happy and that’s just the way I want my kids to live their own life.

1.At the beginning, the author tried to keep his son seated in order to make him _____.

A.pay more attention to his study B.keep silent in the room

C.finish his homework on time D.get right answers

2.Inspired by the case of his son, the author began to doubt ________.

A.the importance of parents B.the old form of education

C.the relationship between kids and their parents D.the good grades of some kids

3.According to the passage, which of the following statements is right?

A.We should help kids correct their wrong ways.

B.Parents should study their kids’ DNA.

C.Kids should be taught to behave themselves.

D.Parents should love and accept their kids.

4.Which of the following would be the best title of the passage?

A.Study hard and you’ll be successful

B.Be friendly to your children

C.Children’s success in their own style

D.Parents’ help with their children’s study

    You may not know a lot of people when you start high school. Maybe your friends from middle school are going to a different high school. Even if you know other freshmen(新生), you still feel nervous that you don’t know any upper-classmen. How are you going to make friends among this sea of unknown faces?

Most high schools hold a freshman orientation(训练) before school actually starts. These are helpful not only because you learn your way around the building and get to meet some of your teachers, but you also get to meet fellow freshmen. That way, when you show up on your first day of school, you may already recognize a few familiar faces.

When you talk to people at orientation, you’ll probably find that a lot of them are feeling just like you are. They’re all new to the school and don’t know what to expect. Talking about a common concern with your classmates can help you develop friendships.

The work in high school is something freshmen are probably worried about. The work in high school builds on what you learned in middle school, giving you a more advanced knowledge of many subjects. So you may find you have more work to do or that it’s a bit more challenging. If you ever find your work too difficult, teachers can give you extra help.

High school also has more after-school activities than middle school did, such as clubs, music and theater groups and sports teams. This is a good time to explore your interests and try new things.

Middle school taught you the basics of academics, time management, and social skills while providing you with a little extra support and guidance. High school gives you the chance to learn how to be more independent and responsible.

1.According to the passage, when they come to the school on the first day freshmen usually feel ____.

A.proud B.nervous C.excited D.afraid

2.What are freshmen probably worried about?

A.The learning task. B.The chances to make friends.

C.The freshman orientation. D.The relationship with teachers.

3.After-school activities mainly help students ____.

A.build up healthy bodies B.develop friendships

C.develop their interests D.improve their learning ability

4.The last paragraph is mainly about ____.

A.what you’ll learn in high school

B.what you leaned in middle school

C.the difference between middle school and high school

D.the importance of being more independent and responsible

    The Gold Coast family holidays are always great fun whether you are from Australia or from abroad. There are beautiful beaches, adventure parks, nature parks and so much more.

There are so many sights to see here. It is a pity to drive in a car and you’ll miss a great part of it. Australia is home to many animals and birds that can only be seen when moving slowly and going into the areas where they live.

When you are on a bicycle, you have the strength of being able to stop whenever you want to see an interesting animal or bird that you have never seen before. It is a quieter way of transportation as well, so you might even be able to take a picture. When you are on the beach, you can breathe that clean air and view the beauty of the water and sand. It is a totally different experience from either simply sunbathing or passing it in a car.

There are many choices of hiring a bicycle to experience the Gold Coast attractions. There are stores that will fit a bike perfectly to your size. These bikes for both adults and children are in many styles and colors to please any taste. If you have ever wanted to try a tandem bike (双人单车), now is your chance, because they have those too.

A bicycle hire on Gold Coast is something that everyone should try at least once. This is a wonderful chance for anyone who likes to cycle and it is also a cheap way to travel with your family.

1.You’d better not drive in a car on Gold Coast because ________.

A.you will break the traffic rules B.you will cause much noise

C.you can’t enjoy the beautiful sights well D.you can’t drive into some parks

2.The following advantages of hiring bikes are mentioned EXCEPT that ________.

A.you can take photos of animals B.it is a cheap way of traveling

C.you can get a clearer sight of animals D.it is a good way to do sunbathing

3.Which of the following words has the same meaning as the word underlined in the third paragraph?

A.advantage B.weakness

C.appearance D.importance

4.What’s the author’s attitude towards a bike hire on Gold Coast?

A.He thinks it’s a personal choice. B.He supports it very much.

C.He doesn’t like this way of traveling. D.He thinks it’s only good for adults.

1.Mr. Green wants to go hiking with his children. They should meet at the Market Square ______.

A.at 2 p.m. on October 5th B.on Saturday morning

C.at 8: 30 a.m. on October 5th D.on Sunday morning

2.Tony needs a house __________.

A.in the countryside B.in the city center

C.near the station D.next to the school

3.Alice wants to practice writing stories in her summer holiday. She had better ______ for more information.

A.send an e-mail to Singles’ Club B.join the Hiking Club

C.make a phone call to Karen D.call Tony at 3338651

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。

Rescue in a Bottle

Curtis Whitson had rafted (v.乘筏) down the Arroyo Seco, a river in central California, several times before.

This year, Curtis Whitson knew the water-fall was coming. He figured he would get out of his raft into the shallow water, get down the rocks along ropes on either side of the falls, and continue on his way, as he had on a previous trip.

But this year was different. Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce. And this year, instead of his friends, Whitson’s companions were his girlfriend, Krystal Ramirez, and his 13-year-old son, Hunter. As the three of them approached the falls late in the afternoon of the third day of their camping trip, Whitson could tell from the increasing roar of water in the narrowing canyon(峡谷) that they were in serious trouble. There was no way they’d be able to get down the rocks as planned.

“The water was just roaring through there with tremendous force,” recalls Whitson, 45.

They had no smart phone service, and they hadn’t seen a single person in the past three days. And Whitson knew that they’d be sharing the ground there with rattlesnakes and mountain lions.

As he was thinking what to do, Whitson hit on a bit of luck---he heard voices coming from the other side of the falls. He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out.

“We have to get these people a message,” Whitson thought.

He grabbed a stick and pulled out his pocketknife to carve “Help” in it. Then he tied a rope to it so the people would know it wasn’t just any stick. He tried throwing it over the falls, but it floated away in the wrong direction.

“We’ve got to do something!” Whitson yelled to his son. “Have we got anything else?”

Then he spotted his water bottle. Whitson grabbed it and carved “Help!”on it. Ramirez also reminded him that he had a pen and paper in his backpack.

Whitson knew it was a slim hope. But he wrote “6-15 19:00 We are stuck here@ the waterfall. Get help please” and pushed the note into the bottle. This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect.

“All right, that’s all we can do,” Whitson told Hunter.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

Paragraph 1:

It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch.

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Paragraph 2:

The next morning, the helicopter returned.

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    We are certain to face challenges(挑战) in life and that is what makes life beautiful. One could argue living life _____facing any challenges is the best thing. On the surface this might seem to be true, _____without challenges, true _____cannot be achieved.

My dream has always been to work in the tech field and to be able to solve most of life’s challenges through _____

One of the skills _____in the tech field is the _____to create software(软件) to solve real-life problems. That means in order to work in the tech field you need to ____ programming knowledge.

Given that I come from an economics background, learning how to program became the ____challenge for me. I did not know where to ____ because at the time I did not have anyone to teach me or provide any form of ____.

After months of struggling with ____ online programming courses and not ___ exactly what I wanted to do, I decided it was time to try something _____

The first step I took was to find people who were good at _____and ask for mentorship (师徒制). I did this by joining several tech communities. This played a(n) ____ role in my journey of learning how to program and also built my confidence. But this alone was not _____

In order to be good at what you do, a lot of _____is needed. Through practice, I was able to learn programming knowledge. I also challenged myself and worked on a couple of beginner projects that ____ me to apply(应用) the knowledge I had learned.

Challenges are part of _____and they help us grow in different aspects(方面) of life and we should always _____challenges.

1.A.by B.for C.without D.after

2.A.but B.if C.because D.so

3.A.kindness B.happiness C.courage D.friendship

4.A.science B.culture C.technology D.art

5.A.required B.limited C.described D.shared

6.A.way B.chance C.need D.ability

7.A.change B.forget C.learn D.create

8.A.latest B.biggest C.most special D.most interesting

9.A.begin B.find C.stay D.stop

10.A.guidance B.communication C.exercise D.money

11.A.dangerous B.enjoyable C.difficult D.horrible

12.A.supporting B.remembering C.admitting D.knowing

13.A.similar B.new C.normal D.regular

14.A.programming B.talking C.believing D.pursuing

15.A.natural B.small C.indirect D.important

16.A.sufficient B.necessary C.expensive D.skillful

17.A.desire B.fortune C.practice D.education

18.A.warned B.chose C.helped D.forced

19.A.future B.life C.belief D.truth

20.A.carry on B.figure out C.take up D.run out

    Children love to have pets, and having these furry animals in your family does good to children. Many studies have shown that kids who have pets do better at school because they have higher scores of emotional intelligence(EI)(情商). Here are some of the ways pets can help children develop their EI.

Grow empathy(同情)

Children are naturally empathetic and having pets can develop this. Researchers Nienke Endenburg and Ben Baard wrote a book The Waltham Book of Human-Animal Interaction, which is an overview of scientific studies about raising pets. 1.. It also shows that even young children who have pets show more empathy towards other animals and people.

Reduce stress

Today, some doctors are writing social prescriptions(处方) to get a pet. Even just petting a dog has been shown to reduce stress in children. 2., because they are great listeners.

Raise self-esteem(自尊)

3. In fact, the authors said that research “found that children’s self-esteem scores increased greatly over a nine-month period of keeping pets in their school classroom. Besides, it was children with originally low self-esteem scores who showed the greatest improvements.”

4.

Many parents find it difficult to talk to their kids about sensitive topics like birth, illness, and death. Learning about these through the lives of their furry family members helps make it easier to understand the cycles of life. 5., but the authors say it can also be a very valuable learning experience. Children will learn how to deal with feelings of sadness and anger.

A.Help prevent loneliness

B.Teach about life cycle events

C.Animals can provide emotional support for kids

D.Of course, experiencing the death of a beloved pet is difficult for kids

E.Kids who take care of pets feel proud and have a sense of achievement

F.The book shows kids who take care of their pets are more caring than those who don’t

G.Having a pet around also helps children better socialize with other kids of the same age