假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10 处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

1.Would you please give me some tip on how to get along with my classmates？

2.It was all because the job that she gave up the plan to take her holiday abroad.

3.The number of students learning English are larger than ever before.

4.This frightening boy is looking for his mother now who was lost in the disaster.

5.He has devoted most of his time to find a cure for the disease.

6.The boy lost heart when he knew he fails the exam again.

7.The computer which I bought it last Wednesday doesn’t work now.

8.They had made up their mind to solve the problem together.

9.New words will soon be forgotten unless frequent used in everyday communication.

10.Hewas the very man which helped the girl out of the water.

    Now I am living in Italy, working as an English language assistant. I am living with one of the _____________ from a local school, who is very kind. At the moment, it’s a bit ___________ as we don’t always understand each other! This is known as a ___________ barrier(障碍), when two people cannot communicate because they don’t have a language in ___________.

Over the past few days, I have learnt that it is more ___________ speaking a language in real life situations than speaking it in the classroom. My teachers could ___________ things to me in English when I didn’t understand. My ___________doesn’t speak any English. When I don’t know the___________ in Italian I try to explain it and when that doesn’t ___________ I try to mime(模仿) the thing I’m talking about.

Yesterday, the internet wasn’t working and I had to ____________  my housemate where the router (路由器)was so I could find the password for the Wi-Fi. I had no ______________ what the Italian word for 'router' was so I tried to explain it a couple of times. In the end, I called it the “internet box” and she ______________what I meant!

However, it isn’t all ______________ ! When we finally understand each other,we both ____________ and have a little celebration. Sometimes I feel very ______________ because I keep making a lot of mistakes, but my housemate ______________ me nicely and tells me that I’m doing well! I can also feel my language ________________ because I have no choice but to __________ Italian! I hope that I will be speaking ____________ a real Italian by the time I ____________. I’m determined to climb over this language barrier!

1.A.teachers B.doctors C.workers D.waiters

2.A.noisy B.difficult C.boring D.proper

3.A.hearing B.sight C.language D.taste

4.A.business B.advance C.addition D.common

5.A.foreign B.excellent C.popular D.different

6.A.forgive B.gain C.explain D.hold

7.A.neighbor B.housemate C.classmate D.friend

8.A.word B.place C.name D.letter

9.A.appear B.work C.happen D.flash

10.A.pass B.tell C.ask D.hand

11.A.point B.use C.doubt D.idea

12.A.kept B.ordered C.understood D.doubted

13.A.simple B.nice C.bad D.wild

14.A.whisper B.clap C.value D.tremble

15.A.unfair B.embarrassed C.moved D.frightened

16.A.corrects B.spreads C.reforms D.overcomes

17.A.improving B.escaping C.worsening D.wasting

18.A.get B.host C.live D.speak

19.A.as B.for C.about D.like

20.A.leave B.begin C.grow D.occur

    Friendship is a very important human relationship and everyone needs good friends. Good friendship has many benefits. It offers companionship, improves self-worth and promotes good health. There are times in our lives such as when we have recently moved into a new town, or changed our jobs or schools. Such changes often leave us without a friend1.But for many of us the process is difficult and requires courage. Below are some helpful suggestions on how to make and keep friends.

1.Associate with others.

The first step to making friends is associating with other people. You can go to public places to meet new people. Besides, you will need to make yourself known by becoming an active member of such places.

2.Start a conversation

Starting a conversation is the second most important step in making new friends.2.You can always start the conversation. Being able to make small talk is a very useful skill in relating with other people.

3.3.

Choosing friends with common interests is important in building friendship as these interests would always bring you and your friend together. Hanging out will always be a pleasant experience.

4. Let it grow.

It is a good thing to stay in touch. However, try not to press your new friend with calls, messages or visits as this would likely wear him or her out and finally you may lose your friend.4..The best friendships are the ones that grow naturally.

5. Enjoy your friendship

The best way to enjoy your friendship is to allow your friends to be themselves.5..Try not to change them from who they are to what you want them to be. Become the kind of friend you will want your friend to be to you.

A.Be cheerful.

B.Do things together.

C.Do not wait to be spoken to.

D.Try not to find fault with your friends.

E.Making new friends comes easy for some people.

F.For a friendship to develop you need to stay in touch.

G.So you will need to give your friend time to react to you.

    I had the meanest mother in the world. While other kids ate candy for breakfast, I had to have cereal (麦片粥), eggs and toast. Others had cokes and candy for lunch, while we had to eat a sandwich. As you can guess, my supper was different from the other kids’. But at least I was not alone in my suffering. My sister and two brothers had the same mean mother as I did.

My mother insisted on knowing where we were at all times. She had to know who our friends were and what we were doing. We had to wear clean clothes every day. Other kids always wore their clothes for days. We reached the height of disgrace (丢脸) because she made our clothes herself, just to save money.

The worst is yet to come. We had to be in bed by 9:00 each night and up at 7:45 the next morning. So while my friends slept, my mother actually had the courage to break Child Labor Law. She made us work. I believed she lay awake all night thinking up mean things to do to us. Through the years, our friends’ report cards had beautiful colors on them, black for passing, red for failing. My mother, however, would merely be content with black marks. None of us was allowed the pleasure of being a dropout (辍学者).

She forced us to grow up into educated and honest adults. Using this as a background, I’m now trying to bring up my three children. I’m filled with pride when my children think I am mean because now I thank God every day for giving me the meanest mother in the world.

1.From the passage we can learn that the writer’s mother was       .

A.not generous at all B.very strict with her children

C.very mean with money matters D.very cruel to her children

2.Which of the following things did the writer hate to do most?

A.Eating differently from other kids.

B.Wearing clean clothes which were made by mother.

C.Going to bed early and getting up early.

D.Letting mother know where they were.

3.It can be inferred from the passage that       .

A.the writer worked hard and usually got good grades in studies

B.mother was punished for breaking the Labor Law

C.all the other kids studied better than the writer

D.the writer’s family lived a painful life

4.Which of the following statements is NOT true according to the passage?

A.Mother practised economy in running her home.

B.The writer is very thankful to her mother.

C.The writer is strict with her children when bringing them up.

D.The writer doesn’t love her mother for the past painful life.

    In China, Double Eleven Shopping Day is approaching. And there is a similar case in the United States—Black Friday. It has been regarded as the beginning of the holiday shopping season. Although it’s not an official holiday, millions of employers give their employees the day off, and many people use that day to get a jump-start on their holiday shopping. A similar day in Canada and Great Britain is called “Boxing Day”.

Black Friday has become somewhat of a marketing sensation in recent years. Since 2005, it has been the busiest shopping day of the year. To lure shoppers, retailers (零售商) routinely open their doors as early as 4 a.m. and offer special sales and promotions to the shoppers that arrive early. Some of the special deals offered by stores are only available in limited quantities. That is why some shoppers intent on getting the best deals often camp out in front of stores overnight so that they’ll be the first in line when the doors open.

But why is it called Black Friday? Historians believe the name started in Philadelphia in the mid-1960s. Bus drivers and police used “Black Friday” to describe the heavy traffic that would block city streets the day after Thanksgiving as shoppers headed to the stores.

Businesses, however, didn’t like the negative tone associated with the “Black Friday” name. In the early 1980s, a more positive explanation of the name began to circulate. According to this alternative explanation, Black Friday is the day when retailers finally begin to turn a profit for the year. In accounting terms (会计行业), operating at a loss is called being “in the red” because accountants traditionally used red ink to show negative amounts. Positive amounts were usually shown in black ink. Thus, being “in the black” is a good thing because it means stores are operating at a profit.

Recently, for those who are too busy to shop on Black Friday or who just don’t want to fight the crowds, the Monday following Black Friday has become known as Cyber Monday (网络星期一) for the many online deals.

1.On Black Friday, the Americans       .

A.don’t have to go to work as usual

B.look exactly like the Canadians

C.are usually busy doing shopping

D.stay at home and relax themselves

2.The underlined word “lure” (in Paragraph 2) probably means       .

A.protect

B.attract

C.persuade

D.remind

3.How do the retailers understand Black Friday?

A.It is totally different from Boxing Day.

B.They usually lose some money on the day.

C.It never keeps them very busy.

D.It probably brings them more money.

4.The author writes this passage in order to       .

A.state the development of Cyber Monday

B.tell the difference between red and black

C.introduce Black Friday to the readers

D.explain the meaning of Boxing Day

    Miep Gies, the woman who hid the Dutch girl Anne Frank’s diary from the Nazis to become one of the world’s most-read books, died after a brief illness at the age of 100.

It was Gies who guarded Anne’s diary, and presented it to the girl’s father, Otto, when he returned from the Auschwitz concentration camp(奥斯威辛集中营) at the end of World War Ⅱ—the only one of his family to survive.

In her diary, Anne Frank wrote about her teenage life hiding from the Nazis in Amsterdam from 1942 to 1944, when the Nazi police discovered her and her family’s hiding place. The diary, first published in 1947, has been translated into 70 languages.

Anne Frank expressed a great wish to live on after her death. Miep Gies saw it as her duty to help in making this happen.

Born in Vienna in 1909, Gies moved to the Netherlands at the age of 11. In 1933, she began working for Otto Frank at his trading company. At great risk to her own safety, she and four other helpers brought food and supplies to the Frank family hiding in a secret office building for more than two years.

When she turned 100, Gies tried to play down her own role. “I’m not a hero,” she said. “It wasn’t something I planned in advance. I simply did what I could to help.”

Every day she received letters from all over the world with questions about her relationship with Anne Frank and her role as a helper. Gies received many honors for her role, including from the Netherlands, Germany and Israel.

1.When did Miep Gies move to the Netherlands?

A.In 1909. B.In 1947.

C.In 1920. D.In 1933.

2.Which of the following is TRUE according to the passage?

A.Only Miep Gies helped the Frank family.

B.Anne’s father Otto survived World War Ⅱ.

C.Anne’s hiding place was discovered in 1943.

D.Miep Gies wasn’t highly honored until her death.

3.By saying “Gies tried to play down her own role”, the writer means Gies ________.

A.didn’t play a role in saving the diary. B.regretted saving the diary.

C.was proud of what she had done. D.thought she was overpraised.

4.What’s the best title for the passage?

A.Woman who saved Anne’s diary dies at 100.

B.Anne Frank’s diary.

C.Survivors of World War Ⅱ.

D.The story of Miep Gies and Anne Frank.

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We have a wide variety of activities and sports to choose from: fishing, dance, basketball, soccer, baseball, and tennis. Boys and girls, aged 8-16, can customize their own schedules in our 2, 3, 4 or 6 week summer camp session for kids.

The aim of Camp All-Star is to develop athletic skills, encourage abilities in leadership, fair play and team work, and provide a fun, rewarding and memorable summer sports camp experience. Our staff have the experience and qualified training necessary to ensure that your child has a successful, memorable and enjoyable time at our summer camp.

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1.Camp All-Star stands out among the others because it ______.

A.is surrounded by a beautiful lake

B.provides various activities and sports

C.offers timely information on its website

D.allows children to play outside all day long

2.One of the goals of Camp All-star is to ______.

A.fire kids’ imagination B.build up kids’ confidence

C.develop kids’ leadership skills D.promote kids’ self-control

3.This advertisement is intended for ______.

A.parents B.coaches

C.staff D.campers

People’s____of life has greatly improved since the reform and opening-up policy(政策)was carried out in China.

A.quantity B.quality C.activity D.reality

The houses across the street are_______,but they were in good condition a few years ago.

A.in rows B.in ruins C.in number D.in detail

American English has so many_________because the American people have come from all over the world.

A.grammar B.vocabulary C.pronunciations D.dialects