Question

现在，越来越多的家庭使用汽车，这改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给社会和家庭带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?请写一篇100字左右有关交通安全的短文。

内容包括：1.遵守交通规则，如……（举一至两例）

2.别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3.劝父母不要酒后驾车，不能在驾驶的时候使用手机。

4.其它（不少于两句）

要求：1.所写内容必须包括所给的信息，并作适当的发挥；

2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3.不得出现真实的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相关信息。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道    traffic jam 塞车

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, As middle school students,

Answer

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

As middle school students we must obey the rules. Traffic safety is everybody's business. For example, we must walk on walk side. When we cross zebra–crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We should tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business ，can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以怎样保证交通安全为主题写一篇作文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容。一是遵守交通规则，如……（举一至两例）；二是别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球；三是劝父母不要酒后驾车，不能在驾驶的时候使用手机。最后是其它（不少于两句），属于让我们自由发挥的内容。主要内容虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从四个方面，告诉大家怎样保证交通安全，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如Traffic safety is everybody's business. For example, we must walk on walk side. When we cross zebra–crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business ，can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.等。

考点：提纲类作文。