Question

你学校最近开展“美好校园”的系列活动，你参加了“美好校园，从我做起”的演讲，请以 “Start out small”为题, 写一篇演讲辞，内容必须包括：

1. 描述图中校园内的不良行为；

2. 自由发挥，描述其他一至两点校园内的不良行为;

2. 发表你的校园文明倡议。

注意：1. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；

2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Start out small

Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school…

Answer

Start out small

Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school. Firstly, in order to save water, we should never forget to turn off the tap after we wash hands or other things. But some of us often forget it. Secondly, we should protect the trees and grass which make our school beautiful. For example, we should follow the rules and not play football on the grass. Besides, don’t liter around. It’s a good habit to put the rubbish into the rubbish can and keep our school clean and tidy. Let’s start out small. Only in this way can we make our school beautiful. So we can study in a beautiful and comfortable environment.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图片作文。根据图片内容和要求，以“美好校园，从我做起”为主题描述一些校园内不文明现象，图片已经给出我们三点提示，要求我们自己适当发挥，再写出一条。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：in order to“为了”；forget to do sth“忘记做某事”；It’s a good habit to do put the rubbish into the rubbish .“将垃圾扔进垃圾箱是好习惯。”以及倒装句的使用。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：图画作文。