Question

为了培养同学们的社会责任意识和社会实践能力，老师要求每个同学关注身边的社区并积极参加社区的社会实践活动，请根据所给提示以“The community centre in my neighborhood”为题，写一篇短文，包括以下要点:

1、我家附近有个社区，大家感到很幸运；

2、周末，义工、大学生来帮助：帮老人购物、打扫卫生，和他们聊天，给他们讲故事；辅导孩子们功课；修理坏了的冰箱、自行车等；

3、我打算为社区（1）……（2）……

注意：（1）要点清楚，语言流畅；（2）字数100词左右；

（3）短文须包括所有要点内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

The community centre in my neighborhood

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Answer

The community centre in my neighborhood

I live in a small town.It is very beautiful here.We love it. Luckily there is a community centre in my neighborhood.On weekends some students come to help the old people .They help to do some cleaning ,go shopping,have a chat with the old people and tell them stories.Some help children here with their homework.Some repair broken fridges and bikes.They have a busy weekend,but they are very happy.

I hope to help them on the weekends.I can play games with the old people here.I can make them happy with me.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是给材料作文，因为这里要写的是平时的义工是怎样做的，所以用一般现在时。要注意主谓一致，适当用一些短语和句式。

【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式，增加了短文的色彩如：On weekends some students come to help the old people . Some help children here with their homework. I hope to help them on the weekends等，文中用了一些连词如：and，but等。提醒学生注意积累一些短语和句式。

考点:提纲作文。