Question

书面表达（15分）

假如你将代表你校2011届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内容要点如下。

回顾	美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获
感谢	老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助
祝愿	考生自拟，至少两点

注意：1. 词数80左右，发言稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

2. 发言稿须包含所有要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow（同年级的）graduates. It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf（代表……）of the graduating class of 2011.

Thank you for listening.

Answer

Good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow（同年级的）graduates.

It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf（代表……）of the graduating class of 2011. It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teacher’s effort, our parents’ support and our classmates’ help. At this moment，I’d like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.

I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future! Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们根据表格中的内容写一篇发言稿。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括三部分的内容。一是回顾学校生活，如美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；二是表达感谢，如老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；最后是表达祝愿。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从三个方面做了很好的发言，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future! Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teacher’s effort, our parents’ support and our classmates’ help.等。

考点：提纲类作文。