Question

书面表达（15分）

伸出你的手，让我们帮助贫困地区的学生，使之能渡过难关。请你以Tom的身份写一份英语倡议书，号召同学们多想办法，奉献爱心。至少写出两种以上的帮助方式以及如此做的目的和意义。字数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总次数。

1.捐钱捐物（目的用途）；2.做兼职工作：收废品，发广告，卖报纸，修自行车，打扫卫生来挣钱；3.交笔友，常写信帮助他们学业上，思想上，心理上的问题。

Dear classmates,

We are so lucky that we can sit in the bright classroom to study happily ,but there are many children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly .We should  do something to help them .______________________________________________

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The more we do ,the better our world will be !

Yours，

Tom

Answer

Dear classmates,

We are so lucky that we can sit in the bright classroom to study happily, but there are many children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. We should do something to help them. First of all, we can donate some money as we can which can help the students buy some books and food for their study and life. If we don’t have enough money, we may do a part-time job to earn money. Such as collecting waste products, sending advertisement, selling papers, repairing bicycles and so on. Then we can make pen friends with them. We can write to them to help their study and thoughts and encourage them to be brave to face the difficulty. The more we do, the better our world will be!

Yours，

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: First of all首先；,Such as例如；and so on等等。We can write to them to help their study and thoughts and encourage them to be brave to face the difficulty. 我们可以写信给他们，帮助他们的学习和思考，鼓励他们勇于面对困难。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲作文。