Question

书面表达（15分）

由于世博会在上海的召开，上海这座城市成为了世界各国人民关注的焦点，这其中就包括你的好朋友Song Qingwen，他从小就跟他的爸爸去了美国定居。他现在很想了解一下家乡上海的情况。假如你叫Wang Feng, 请你给他发一封e-mail，为他介绍一下有关情况。内容包括：

①城市变化很大，水更清，路更宽，城市更干净。② 上海的人们都富起来了，到处都是现代化的工厂和高楼大厦。③ 上海世博会是迄今为止规模最大的世博会。世界各国游客都前往参观，希望你也能回来看看。

要求：条理清楚，语句通顺，结构完整，可适当发挥。字数60词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

提示词： 2010 Shanghai World Expo  2010年上海世博会

Dear Song Qingwen, It’s a long time to see you. I hear you want to know something about our city, Shanghai. Best wishes for you and your family! Yours, Wang Feng

Answer

Dear Song Qingwen,

It’s a long time to see you. I hear you want to know something about our city, Shanghai. Great changes have taken place in this city. We have planted more trees in it and the water in the river is much cleaner than before. New roads are wider and wider. When you come here, you’ll find the street is very clean and tidy. The people in this city are richer; they build many modern factories. Tall buildings appeared instead of low houses. Because of the 2010 Shanghai World Expo, many visitors for all over the world are coming here for traveling. I hope you can come back and have a look.

Best wishes for you and your family!

Yours,

Wang Feng

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: wider and wider越来越宽；, Tall buildings appeared instead of low houses. 高层建筑显现，不再是低矮的房屋。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲作文。