Question

书面表达（15分）

初中的三年即将过去，作为一名即将毕业的学生，你一定有很多的感想。请以I feel ______ in the three years.为题写一篇短文，谈一谈你对这三年学习生涯的感想。

要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；

2. 补全标题（可以用happy, excited, sad, bored, appreciated…）

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

4. 80词左右。短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

I feel happy in the three years.

Three years of time will pass in this school for me. I will graduate from this school.

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Answer

One possible version:

I feel happy in the three years.

Three years of time will pass in this school for me. I will graduate from this school. During the three years, I feel happy very much. Let me tell you the reasons:

First, thanks for my teachers. I’ve learnt a lot in the three years. The teachers told me how to learn, how to talk, how to think and how to do in my life.

Next, I’ve made many good friends in the three years. When I feel sad, angry or excited, they appear in my eyes and share it with me. Sometimes we help each other and also we do sports together. Spending time with them makes me very happy.

Finally, I help others a lot. I always help those students who are in trouble. When they got out of the trouble, they felt happy. And I felt happy, too.

In a word, I’m a happy student in the three years.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写对三年学习生涯的感想。应该用第一人称。写作前先补全标题，根据给出的提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用，最后串联起来。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。在80词左右的篇幅中，恰当地运用了一些短语和句式，如thanks for 、each other、In a word等。

考点：提纲作文。