Question

以“My friend”为题向你的同学介绍你最好的朋友，要点如下：

1. 就读于阳光中学8年级

2. 不仅是我的邻居，也是我最好的朋友 ；

3. 留着黑色的长直发，长着一张圆脸，总是面带微笑 ，很有幽默感，爱讲笑话

4. 乐于助人，经常在公车上给人让座

5. 喜欢读书， 经常从图书馆借书，并在课后和我讨论看过的书

4. 理想是当一名社会工作者，认真倾听并帮助人们解决困难。

Answer

I have a friend. Her name is Millie. She is not only my neighbor but also my best friend. She studies in Sunshine Middle School. She has long black hair and a round face. She is humorous and she likes to tell jokes. There’s always a simile on her face，too. She is such a helpful girl that she often give her seat to others on the bus. She likes reading books and she often borrows books from the library. We often talk about the books that she had read. When she grows up，she wants to be a social worker，listen to the people and help them with their difficulties.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将所提示内容的情况介绍清楚。根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：help sb with sth帮助某人做某事；such……that……如此……以至于……；not only……but also……不但……而且……；talk about谈论；grow up长大等。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文