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书面表达 (15分) 假如你是一名九年级的学生刘涛,你要写一封信给青少年专家Si...

书面表达   (15分)

假如你是一名九年级的学生刘涛,你要写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend , 告诉他你遇到的问题, 并请求帮助。请根据下表中所列的信息,写完这封信。

姓名

刘涛

星座

Gemini

最喜欢的颜色

Blue , yellow

存在问题

父母对他要求严格, 他几乎没有时间玩;

迷恋上网聊天, 经常晚回家, 不能按时交作业;

担心不能通过考试,父母要求放弃上网;

几乎没有亲密的朋友, 感到孤独,为此很苦恼。

目前需求

希望得到建议

注意:

词数100 左右。信的开头和结尾已写好, 不计入词数。

信中须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译, 可适当发挥, 使语句通顺, 意思连贯,符合逻辑。

Dear Sigmund Friend,

My name is Liu Tao. I’m a Grade 9 student. ____________________________________

_______________________________________                                     ____

_______________________________________                                     ____

_______________________________________                                     ____

Can you give me some useful advice? I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Liu Tao

 

Dear Sigmund Friend, My name is Liu Tao. I’m a Grade 9 student. My constellation is Gemini. Blue and yellow are my favorite colors. I have some problems in my life. Parents are strict with me. And I almost have no time to play. I love chatting online too much. I often come back home late. I can't hand in my homework on time. Parents worry about me and they think I can't pass the exam. They ask me to give it up. I almost have no close friends and feel very lonely. I feel very, very worried. Can you give me some useful advice? I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes! Yours, Liu Tao 【解析】 试题分析:这篇短文要求我们以刘涛的名义写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend , 告诉他你遇到的问题, 并请求帮助。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲,主要包括以下内容:一是写作人的一些信息:姓名-刘涛;星座-Gemini;最喜欢的颜色-Blue , yellow。二是存在问题:父母对他要求严格, 他几乎没有时间玩;迷恋上网聊天,经常晚回家, 不能按时交作业;担心不能通过考试,父母要求放弃上网;几乎没有亲密的朋友,感到孤独,为此很苦恼。三是目前需求:希望得到建议。提纲虽然已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。 【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据提示,说明了自己遇到的问题以及想要寻求帮助的愿望。短文层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I have some problems in my life.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如Parents are strict with me. I almost have no close friends and feel very lonely.等。 考点:提纲类作文。  
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