Question

假如你叫Andy，学校将组织由学生推选“十佳少年”的评选活动。你计划写一封推荐信给校长Mr William，推荐你的朋友Lucy当选，要点如下：

Name	Basic information	Personal qualities	Things
Lucy	A Grade 9 student	Hard-working	Practise singing for 2 hours every day
Kind and friendly	Do extra work for the class
Generous	Donate money to charities
Helpful	---

注意事项：  1. 词数90个左右，推荐信的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。

Dear Mr William,

I am writing to recommend my friend Lucy as one of the top ten teenagers. She has many good personal qualities.

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I think Lucy has all the qualities to be one of the top ten teenagers. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Andy

Answer

Dear Mr William,

I am writing to recommend my friend Lucy as one of the top ten teenagers. She has many good personal qualities.

Lucy is a Grade 9 student. She is hard-working. She has been in the Music Club for over 2 years. She practices singing for 2 hours every day. She’s very kind and friendly. She likes working with his classmates and never minds doing extra work for the class. Lucy is generous, too. Every year she donates her pocket money to the charities.

She’s also helpful. One day, on his way to the cinema, she found a boy crying in the street. She helped the child find his parents. Because of it, she missed his favorite film.

I think Lucy has all the qualities to be one of the top ten teenagers. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Andy

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称。写作中注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题；同时注意书信的格式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上多用简单句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：practice doing、minds doing、donate--- to---、on one’s way to、find--- doing等，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，背诵一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：材料作文。