Question

写作（15分）

以Tom’s lifestyle为题根据汉语提示，写一篇短文

（要求: 语句通顺，信息完整，无语法错误，不少于80字）

提示：快餐 fast food

1. 我的朋友Tom喜欢玩电脑游戏，他从不锻炼，所以很胖。他喜欢吃快餐和甜食，但是它们对健康不好。现在他需要改变他的生活方式。

2. 他计划每天6:30起床，他在家吃早饭。早饭他吃些牛奶，面包和鸡蛋。

3. 他没有时间回家吃午饭。他在学校吃一碗米饭、一些肉和蔬菜。有时，他吃鱼。

4. 在晚上，他常常和他的父母一起吃晚饭。 饭后他有时去散步。每个星期六下午他和朋友们一起打篮球。现在他很强壮很健康。

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Answer

Tom's lifestyle

I have a friend . His name is Tom . He likes playing computer games .He often eats hamburgers, chicken and ice cream. He seldom eats vegetables and fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals. He doesn't like sports. So he is fat.He feels that it's time for him to change his diet and lifestyle. He plans to get up at 6:30,and has breakfast at home.He has milk,bread and eggs.He has no time for lunch at home,so he has it at school.For lunch ,he has rice meat and vegetables.sometimes he has fish. He has supper at home with his parents. He goes for a walk after supper. He plays basketball with his friends every Saturday.Now he is strong and healthy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍汤姆的生活方式。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He is ......，He often eats......；及He wants to......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了汤姆不健康的生活方式，接下来介绍此处用了it's time for him to，plans to，every day等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。